Judi Fennell | Meet a Genie
November 10, 2011
First, thank you so much for having me back here at Fresh Fiction (LOVE the pink
shirts, ladies!) This month I'm celebrating the release of my fifth book, and second in the
Bottled Magic series, GENIE
KNOWS BEST. If you've read the first book, I DREAM OF GENIES, you will
sort of have met the hero of GENIE KNOWS BEST, Kal. He's
the genie who was at trial with Eden, her for accidentally murdering her
(perverted) master, and him for removing the cuffs that bind him into The
Service. The interesting thing about writing Kal's story was that I knew him
long before I knew what his story was, but trying to figure out where in his
life to start this story was a tough one. Do I start with him getting arrested from his lover's arms and brought to trial?
(Kind of a bummer moment in his life, so probably not the best place to start
what is supposed to be a romantic comedy...) Do I start with him fleeing treasure hunters who are looking for his bottle? (It
was fun to write, but there was no romance because Samantha, the heroine, wasn't
even a twinkle in her father's eye—mainly because he wasn't even a twinkle
in HIS father's eye...) I tried starting about a half hour before Samantha inherits the bottle at her
father's "life celebration," and while that was a cute scene, the story really
doesn't start until Samantha overhears her fiancé calling her useless and
clueless—at her father's "life celebration," no less. Yes, Albert is as
far from Prince Charming as you can get. Kal, on the other hand... I had a blast writing him. Kal wrapped himself around my heart back when I first
"met" him for Eden's backstory. I remember picturing him on the dais next to
her, facing Faruq, the evil vizier who had it in for him, and well... here. I'll
let you read the trial scene that I didn't end up using, but still love. If
you'd like to see the other outtakes and an excerpt from what did make it
into the book, check out my website: www.JudiFennell.com. Hope you enjoy the (magic carpet) ride! Outtake from GENIE KNOWS
BEST ©Judi Fennell City of Paradise, Sahara Desert 213 AD Kal paraded through the corridors of the High Master's palace with his head held
high, his anger in check, and the all-important vial of potion tucked securely
beneath his tongue. He was finally going to be free. After two hundred years of captivity at the
hands—and sadistic imagination—of his old nemesis, the High Master's
vizier, Kal was finally going to outsmart Faruq and lose himself in the vast
desert surrounding them. "Move along, traitor," one of the eunuch guards taunted, poking him in the back
with the recently sharpened point of his scimitar. Kind of hard to get mad at a eunuch. All Kal could muster for him was pity
because, personally, he'd rather be dead than sentenced to that hell on earth. The corridor opened into the main hall where a serving girl was pouring ambrosia
into a set of glasses beside the High Master's throne. Before it, in the middle
of the room, stood a dais three times the size of Kal's cell and draped in blue
silk shot through with gold. The irony wasn't lost on him as he glanced down at the blue sirwal he'd
been given to wear. Everyone knew the High Master favored blue; it was the gold
that was ironic; it matched the bracelets Kal had figured out how to remove,
which was his crime and the reason he was here. Two other prisoners were already seated on the dais, with cushions for four
more. Kal wondered what their transgressions were. Surely none of them could
compete with the horror he'd committed; no djinn removed the bracelets of
Servitude, a badge of honor among those who found The Service admirable. He was no longer one of them. Kal ran his tongue over the vial his former lover had given him before he'd been
captured. Iman had taken his lantern for safekeeping, so he still had hope: as
long as his lantern lay unclaimed, he could belong to no man. But the minute
someone picked it up, he was back in The Service. Thanks to Iman, he'd been able to keep Faruq from finding it. No matter what
torture the vizier had devised, Kal couldn't reveal something he didn't know. By
the time he'd broken down about Iman's aid, she'd been dead for over a century.
One perk to being mortal—about the only one as far as Kal could see. "Move along." The eunuch prodded him again. Kal stopped and spun around. He'd had enough of being sword practice. And he was
itching for a fight. "Go ahead, walad. Stab me. Let's see if you've got
the balls to do it." A stricken look crossed the eunuch's face just as Kal realized what he'd said.
The guy didn't have the balls, actually. The big, muscular guard behind the first one growled. "Get up the steps now,
traitor, or you won't either." Newly snipped, probably. And not happy about it. And definitely not worth it. Kal climbed the steps, wanting to get through this trial so he could be out of
here faster than a flying carpet. If only he could use his powers on a carpet, but no. He'd have to lay low
on magic because Faruq would be able to track him through the Glimmer all magic
left behind—unless he could come up with some way to disguise it. A door opened on the far side of the room and three women were brought in, two
in shackles and the last one with such a disgruntled look on her face, Kal
wanted to laugh. She was pissed and, yeah, he could relate. "Sit." Newly-Snipped knocked the back of Kal's knees and shoved down on his
shoulders, leaving him no choice but to do as he was ordered. Story of his life. The shackled women stumbled up the steps on the far side of the dais, their
chains catching under their feet. The other woman added Disgust to Disgruntled
and huffed over to the steps he'd just climbed, marching up them and plopping on
the cushion next to him. "What are you in for?" she asked, her eyes a surprising blue against an olive
complexion. "Quiet!" Newly-Snipped shoved his knee into Kal's back as if Kal had been the
one talking. Ah well, the guy had to muscle his testosterone around while he
still had it. Blue Eyes rolled those striking eyes, then turned her face forward and arranged
her tiny feet beneath her knees. No lotus position for her. Faruq wasn't going
to be pleased about that. Faruq was all about the pomp and
circumstance—and torture and starvation—of his position. A cloud of blue mist wafted into the room, dissipating when the High Master
emerged with Faruq following a half pace behind—the closest he could get
without overstepping his bounds, but Kal knew how much that half step killed the
power-hungry vizier. The High Master clapped his hands and the eunuchs stepped behind the prisoners
and slammed the tips of their scimitars into the wooden dais. The room grew
quiet as the High Master scanned the line of prisoners. Then he began giving
those at the far end his Evil Eye—the one that rendered them either dead
or unconscious for transportation to their bottles and lanterns. He knew which
would be his fate; there was only one outcome for removing the bracelets. The manacled women fell back in tandem, the eunuchs catching them before they
hit the floor. The High Master approached the next victim, er, prisoner, and Faruq read the
man's list of transgressions from a papyrus scroll. He hadn't finished before the High Master passed judgment. Kal jiggled his knees with nervous energy and tongued the vial. Iman, herbal
mistress extraordinaire, had said it worked almost immediately. He should have
enough time to swallow the evidence before he, too, would keel over, looking for
all intents and purposes as if the Evil Eye had worked its deadly magic on him. The High Master moved closer and Kal saw a slimy smile slide across Faruq's face
when the vizier's gaze landed on him. Faruq could look that way because
he'd learned what Kal had tried so desperately to hide from him over the
years—that the bracelets that bound his kind into The Service had one
weakness. One way they could be removed. Kal ought to tell someone. What if the potion didn't work as Iman said it would?
What if Faruq caught on and managed to kill him? He couldn't let the secret die
with him. The man next to him fell back, the eunuch behind him catching him and laying him
down softly. "Diamonds," Kal muttered to Blue Eyes. Of course, telling her would be a loss if she was sentenced to death, too. The
chances were fifty-fifty for her. For him? One hundred percent dead. Or so they'd think. The High Master now stood before him. Kal worked the vial onto his back teeth
and closed his jaw, waiting for the right moment. "High Master, this is Khaled," Faruq said, not even trying to keep the gloating
out of his voice. "The one who destroyed your most magnificent bracelets. The
one who dared to try to release himself from his pledge of Service, and then
hide like the dog he is. The one who is unworthy of even the slightest mercy on
your part." Kal snorted and rolled his eyes. He couldn't help it. The vizier was laying it
on thick. Especially after the bastard had earned the vizier position by
stealing his thesis. The High Master glanced over to study Blue Eyes when Kal returned his gaze. Was
that a look of regret on the chubby old guy's face? Hmm... Maybe her odds were eighty-twenty. "Sire?" Faruq was nothing if not diligent. The High Master shook his head and grabbed the sides of his shudra,
pulling them across his belly where eight inches still separated them. "He freed himself?" the High Master asked Faruq, one eyebrow arching into his
bald head. "You corrected this oversight, I presume." "I have, Sire." "Good." The High Master bent down and stared Kal in the eyes. The High Master's
irises started to swirl. Kal crunched the glass vial between his teeth, uncaring that he'd cut his
tongue. This better work. The swirling in the High Master's irises increased and Kal could swear bolts of
lightning flashed across his pupils, but he remembered to close his eyes so the
magic wouldn't have any affect. And then the potion hit. Kal could feel it slam through his veins, and he had
time for only one thought before he fell back into the potion-induced coma. Damn it all—Newly-Snipped didn't catch him. ### The thing is, while Kal tried to fake his own death, he was dealing with the
High Master—the all-knowing, and in some cases, all-plotting ruler of the
djinn world. Kal should never have thought he'd pull something over on the High
Master. Because he couldn't. He ended up spending the next eighteen hundred years in The
Service until Samantha, his 1001st master found him. And then the fun
began... GENIE KNOWS
BEST by Judi
Fennell - In Stores November 2011 Be careful what you wish for... Samantha Blaine is about to make a fateful discovery. A tall, dark, handsome,
ohmygosh kind of fateful discovery... Kal is very pleased to meet his attractive new master—especially since he
intends to seduce her into granting him freedom. But when seriously dark magic
spells trouble for both of them, Kal can't help himself from falling for the
woman who holds his fate in her hands... Warmly acclaimed by readers and critics alike, Judi Fennell brings to life a
fabulous world of magic and mayhem where wishes come true in the most unexpected
ways! About the Author Judi Fennell is an
award-winning author and writes what she calls "fairy tales with a twist." Her
romance novels have been finalists in Gather.com's First Chapters and First
Chapters Romance contests, and have won numerous RWA Chapter Awards, including
the FF&P Prism Award, and the New Jersey Golden Leaf Award. Judi lives with
her family in suburban Philadelphia, PA, where she is working on the next book
in the Genie Trilogy, MAGIC GONE WILD, set for release in August 2012.
For more information, please visit http://www.judifennell.com/.
Comments
37 comments posted.
Re: Judi Fennell | Meet a Genie
I really like the outtake. Makes me more interested in the book. (Pam Howell 8:10am November 10, 2011)
I really enjoyed the outtake, I love comedy romances. Sandra Hill is one of my favourites. (Barbara Hanson 8:27am November 10, 2011)
Sounds terrific! Blessings, Marjorie (Marjorie Carmony 9:00am November 10, 2011)
Loved the excerpt. This is a new author for me and would love to win and read this book. Thanks for the chance to win. (Chris Bails 10:25am November 10, 2011)
It's just Magic! The idea and the follow-thru make these two book TBR pile necessities. Join me. There is magic in the air! (Sandra Spilecki 10:47am November 10, 2011)
Thanks for the lovely post and "outtake". I love those!!! I just got your first book for my kindle and in print :) and I can't wait to read it. Thanks again! (Erin Fender 11:25am November 10, 2011)
The excerpt sounds interesting. I need to read the first book in the Bottled Magic series. (Tamara Hunter 11:33am November 10, 2011)
Hi, Judi!! I'm glad you came back to talk about your new book!! The outtake sounds sooooo good, and I can't wait to read it!! You have quite a way of telling a story, and having a person feel as if they're right there in person, experiencing the event in real life!! I hope that made sense!! Anyway, I would love to get my hands on one of those bottles, since I could use a little excitement. Just kidding, of course, but I'm not kidding about wanting to read your book!! Congratulations on the new book, and the cover is really eye-catching as well. (Peggy Roberson 12:02pm November 10, 2011)
This concept of a Genie is so unique - I'd love to read it. (Diane Sallans 12:21pm November 10, 2011)
I like some comedy with my romances---so this book should suite me just fine. A Genie sounds like a lot of fun. (Sue Farrell 12:37pm November 10, 2011)
Has been some time since I last read a book with a Genie... sounds great! (Colleen Conklin 12:40pm November 10, 2011)
Enjoyed the Outtake from GENIE KNOWS BEST, really looking forward to reading the book (Shirley Younger 1:23pm November 10, 2011)
"Genie Knows Best" sounds great, will have to read it!!!! (Lisa Avila 1:56pm November 10, 2011)
Sorry for stopping by so late. The Day Job has been very busy. Pam - Glad you enjoyed the outtake. It was fun to write and I wish I could have used it in the story, but at least it makes good blog fodder. :)
Barbara - thanks for stopping by! I'm a Sandra Hill fan, too.
Marjorie - thanks so much!
Chris - Thanks for checking my stories out and best of luck in the drawing.
Sandra - thanks for the enthusiasm!
Erin - in kindle AND in print? Wow. Thank you so much!
Tamara - you actually don't need to read them in order; they were written as stand-alones. This is actually as close as Eden and Kal get and they don't have anything to do with each other in their respective books.
Peggy - ! Awwww! Thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoy them! And, yes, I've been blessed by the cover gods. Or actually, one. Cover Goddess, Anne Cain.
Diane - thanks for checking it out!
Sue - it was a lot of fun to write.
Colleen - thanks for stopping by and checking it out!
Shirley - I hope you enjoy the (magic carpet) ride!
Lisa - thank you so much for stopping by! (Judi Fennell 2:16pm November 10, 2011)
Loved the outtake on Genie Knows Best. After going through that, Kal deserves happiness. Really looking forward to reading this book. Thanks for the giveaway! (Cathy Phillips 2:22pm November 10, 2011)
It's been sometime since I last came across a Genie book that sounded interesting enough to read - this one made the grade though :D (Ilona Fenton 2:22pm November 10, 2011)
Judi, I have your Mer trilogy and loved it. Humor is so very necessary in life and there is just too little of it. A story can have serious elements, but told tongue-in-cheek and with humor thrown in, it is all the more enjoyable. I look forward to this Genie series and whatever you come up with next.
Best of luck with the release of GENIE KNOWS BEST. (Patricia Barraclough 2:42pm November 10, 2011)
I have not read any of your books yet, but I intend to. I know first hand you should be very, VERY, careful what you wish or ask for. You may get it and believe me it wont be what you wanted!! (Joyce Bruner 3:09pm November 10, 2011)
Well, it would be nice to meet a Genie kindof like having your way all the time is fine by me. It's a good fantasy and sounds like your book would be fun all the way. (Alyson Widen 3:24pm November 10, 2011)
I've heard good things about this series. I have enjoyed your books in the past and I'm sure these are wonderful too. Your covers are absolutely lovely! (Jeanne Sheats 4:03pm November 10, 2011)
I haven't read any genie stories before. This will definately be a refreshing change. Thank you! (Patti Paonessa 4:20pm November 10, 2011)
Your a new author for me. This sounds like a great book to start with. (Kathleen Bianchi 5:11pm November 10, 2011)
This sounds like a great book, I'm always looking for new authors. (Wilma Frana 5:15pm November 10, 2011)
Cathy - Kal is Definitely worthy! ;}
Ilona - thanks for the high marks!
Patricia - So glad you enjoyed the Tritones. Here's hoping the genies will take you on as magical a ride.
Joyce - Hope you enjoy the story!
Alyson - Who wouldn't want a gorgeous guy at your bidding, right? ;}
Jeanne - Thanks for reading. I love my covers, too. Anne Cain is the very talented artist.
Patti - enjoy the (magic carpet) ride!
Kathleen - Thanks for checking it out.
Wilma - hope you enjoy it! (Judi Fennell 5:52pm November 10, 2011)
Hi Judi! I thoroughly enjoyed your post and outtake from your latest book, 'Genie Knows Best'. Love the concept of a magic bottle and mayhem and perhaps, some granted wishes! I am going to check out your books and am glad to find out that they don't have to be read in any particular order. Wish I had a magic bottle and 3 wishes to be granted!!! I might have to have that guy on the cover of your book as one of my wishes! (Linda Luinstra 6:49pm November 10, 2011)
Your book sounds interesting and I would love to read it. I remember watching I Dream of Jeannie when I was younger; this brings back memories. (Diane Sadler 7:03pm November 10, 2011)
Linda - I think you might have to get in line for Kal... Lol
Diane - yep, I was a big I Dream of Jeannie fan, too! (Judi Fennell 7:14pm November 10, 2011)
This book sounds like a fun read! Thanks for the chance to win! (Jennifer Langford 7:25pm November 10, 2011)
Book sounds great, enjoyed the outtake. (Sheila True 9:01pm November 10, 2011)
A fabulous out-take thank you. (Mary Preston 9:25pm November 10, 2011)
The book sounds like fun. Thanks for giving me a chance to win your book. (Linda Hall 10:06pm November 10, 2011)
Thanks for the giveaway. This story sounds like a lot of fun. Who hasn't tried rubbing a lamp just in case?! (Jennifer Beyer 10:15pm November 10, 2011)
Love the fun excerpt. :) Sounds like a terrific book! :) I loved I dream of Jeannie when I was younger. :) (May Pau 10:25pm November 10, 2011)
wow i never seen or red any of the book but would love to read this one and i love the blog that you did on it (Desiree Reilly 10:26pm November 10, 2011)
Beautiful covers - enjoyed the excerpt. Definitely need to find out more about Kal. (Mary C 11:49pm November 10, 2011)
I love the out take, newly snipped, he he he (Lisa Kendall 12:13pm November 11, 2011)
Thank you, everyone, for checking the stories out. And, yes, I had a whole lot of fun writing this scene. Newly-Snipped made me giggle, too. :) (Judi Fennell 10:56pm November 11, 2011)
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