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Sara Humphreys | My Favorite Moment with Shane and Maya in VAMPIRE TROUBLE

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Picking a favorite scene is almost as daunting as picking a favorite character but If I must then I must. Maya and Shane’s story is one of the most emotional that I’ve written and I sure hope that translates to the reader. More than one reader who’d read TALL, DARK, AND VAMPIRE (Dead in the City #1) was scratching their head when they heard Maya was the heroine of VAMPIRE TROUBLE.

I get it.

She was a spoiled brat in that book and seemed about as deep as a puddle. How
could you possibly root for her? Well, as with most people, there’s much more to
Maya than meets the eye. There’s a reason why she’s always hunting human men and
toying with them like a cat does with a mouse. I can’t tell you what it is
because I don’t want to post any spoilers but let’s just say she’s got a lot
going on behind those big blue eyes.

Shane Quesada is a four hundred year old vampire sentry and most readers thought
he had the emotional range of a gnat. However, just like Maya, he’s more than he
seems. He’s not just a big, hot, sexy, killing machine. He’s much more. And
perhaps a spunky little bartender with a penchant for troublemaking is just what
he needs to crack that stoic shell.

The scene below is one of my faves because it’s the beginning of Maya’s journey to finding her power, to say nothing of fanning the flames with Shane. In this scene, Maya and Shane are in the Presidium’s armory to get fitted for weapons before leaving the city. Xavier is the weapons master and resident genius for the vampire government.

***

She held the weapon in both hands and turned it over, carefully inspecting it. It was lighter than she expected and had a long, thin barrel with what looked like a skinny pole running along the top of it. The handle was smooth and as she wrapped her fingers around it, she was surprised at how easily and naturally it fit in her hand.

β€œHow is it?” Shane’s voice drifted over her left shoulder, making Maya jump a
bit. He’d moved in behind her without a sound and now stood just inches away.
β€œIs it too heavy or cumbersome feeling?”

β€œIt’s a gun.” Maya lifted one shoulder and looked at the weapon in her hands. β€œI
have no idea how it’s supposed to feel. I’ve never held one before. At least,
not since I was turned,” she added quickly. β€œI couldn’t tell you what the hell I
held or didn’t hold when I was human.”

β€œWell, I doubt you ever held anything like this.” Xavier pushed his glasses up onto his head and pointed one pudgy finger at the gun. β€œThat gun takes standard silver bullet ammo and liquid silver bullets.”

β€œThat’s new.” Shane had moved closer but Maya did her best to focus on what
Xavier was saying instead of the way her body was reacting to Shane.

β€œAnd deadly to both vamps and werewolves.” Xavier snagged two ammunition
magazines from the shelf behind him and held them up. β€œThe black mags contain
the solid silver bullets. As you know, they kill only with a shot to the head or
heart. The white mags have the liquid silver bullets. As soon as they hit the
target, liquid silver is injected into the bloodstream. Given the amount, it’s
almost always fatal.”

β€œYou’re a genius, my friend.” Shane reached past Maya and took the ammunition
from Xavier. β€œI’ll hold onto these.”

β€œFine with me,” Maya shuddered. β€œJust being near this stuff is a little
intimidating.”

β€œThat’s not what’s frightening,” Shane said as he zipped up his bag before
moving in behind her again.

β€œOh really?” She looked over her shoulder at him. β€œThen what is?”

β€œLike most creatures, you fear what you don’t know.”

In a blink, Shane reached around and wrapped both arms around her. Pressing his
body against hers, he spun her so that she was facing the stainless steel wall
and could see their combined reflections. He slid his hands along her arms until
his fingers were wrapped around hers, which were curled around the gun.

β€œBut we can remedy that.” He kissed her cheek, a featherlight brush along her
flesh, making her stomach do that flip-flop thing again. Holding her stare in
the mirror-like finish of the wall, he adjusted her grip on the gun and gingerly
slid her finger onto the trigger with his. His flesh covered hers at every
possible spot and he nestled his head alongside hers as he adjusted her stance.
β€œThe trick is to be gentle.” Shane’s voice, quiet but strong, filled the room.
His hands remained over hers but they merely rested there, like a caress,
guiding her. β€œYou don’t need to apply much pressure to make it fire.”

Maya nodded and did her best to concentrate on what Shane was talking about but
having him so close and feeling the hard planes of his body along hers, was
highly distracting. The slow burn of desire crackled and simmered through her
blood as Shane’s hips pressed against her. If he kept this up, a lot more than
the gun was going to fire.

β€œYour stance should be balanced.” He grinned and slid one boot-clad foot between
hers as he gently but insistently nudged her feet apart. β€œShoulder width apart.
And never, ever take your eye off the target.”

He added the tiniest bit of pressure against her finger on the trigger and a
bright red light beam came out of barrel.

β€œLaser sighting,” Shane murmured, the scruff of his unshaven face rasped enticingly along her cheek as he spoke, creating delicious friction. His voice rumbled in his chest and vibrated through her and around her. β€œAll you have to do is point and shoot.

Comments

5 comments posted.

Re: Sara Humphreys | My Favorite Moment with Shane and Maya in VAMPIRE TROUBLE

This is not my normal genre of book to read, but the excerpt
that you chose was one that peaked my interest. I just might
give your book a try. I'd like to see how the plot plays out.
(Peggy Roberson 11:53am July 10, 2014)

Hi Peggy! Thanks so much. I'd love to know what you think xx
(Sara Humphreys 4:54pm July 10, 2014)

Yummy excerpt! I'm looking forward to reading this.
(Janie McGaugh 8:39pm July 10, 2014)

Adding this series to my ever growing list of books I need to
read!
(Debbie Wiley 8:02am July 11, 2014)

Thanks a lot Sara ... now I have another series to add to my to be bought and read list. The excerpt for VAMPIRE TROUBLE sold me and I can't wait to get my hands on it!!
(Annetta Sweetko 10:40pm July 12, 2014)

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