When I was in college, I found myself sitting in the grove of trees by the
classroom building with a friend. We'd just left our class on Ibsen,
Strindberg, and Mann, and we weren't very happy. How could we have been? In
Ibsen's Ghosts, Oswald was just crying out for "the sun," and so were
we. The sun hadn't been out for a month, the dank Tulle fog all around us like,
well, dank Tulle fog.
It was there that my friend proceeded to tell me a story that almost made me
jump out of my skin. She must have needed to tell me, letting me into the dark
side of her life, a life that maybe had only a window seat of light in it. I
was 22-years-old and hadn't heard much at that point, sheltered in mostly good
ways. In later years, I tried to write about my reaction to her story in
poetry, essay, and short story, until the writer Grace Paley told me that I
wasn't able to write about it because it wasn't my story.
"It's hers to tell," she said, so I never tried again.
And the fact is, by the time Grace told me that ten years after my friend told
it to me, the story didn't seem as bizarre and horrible and sick as it had in
1984 in the winter fog and chill. Maybe I had taken in her story and Ibsen's
and Strindberg's and Mann's, sort of a Death in Turlock kind of thing,
and made it this big black ball of a story that seemed to haunt me. It was a
group literary haunting, with her story in the lead.
But yesterday, I realized that people can tell me anything, and I pretty much
accept it all. In the course of reading 15 student essays during conferences, I
learned about dead mothers and siblings and alcoholic fathers and disturbed
sisters. I learned about lost blue cars and anorexia nervosa, and pretty
much what I did when I heard these facts was nod and say, "Great detail."
I don't think I'm desensitized, but the fact is, I don't think much is secret in
human life. Or needs to be, really. Letting it out, putting it on the page,
saying what is true is so freeing. Of course, we need to think about our
audience, and that's why I didn't tell you my friend's story. It might have
shocked you, there on the web page. And besides, as Grace said, the story isn't
mine to tell. The only part of the story that is mine is the part of the girl
on the bench listening to her friend.
Yesterday afternoon as the rain hurled down from the sky, one student and I got
into a discussion about writing the clause "she passed."
I said, "What? Did she get an A?"
"It's not very clear, is it? Passed," the student said.
No, it's not clear, not even when we say death. No matter the word, death
confuses us. But it's clearer, more true, more real, more freeing to admit the
loss to the world and move through and past it into the story, into the memory,
into the rest of the time without the person who passed.
"Write died," I said. "Write 'she died.'"
My student took down some notes, and I sat there waiting for the next
description, the details this student pulled from her life, a pulling that might
have felt like death. But here she was, still alive, talking about it with me.
"Okay," she said. "What else?"
I’ve lost track of my long-ago friend, the one with the story, and her story no
longer haunts me. But what I learned from her and her tale is that I can listen
for story. I can hear it. In fact, I want to hear it.
“Tell me,” I want to say to my students. “Tell me everything.”
Jessica Inclan
8 comments posted.
I love the stories also. But what happens when you're the end of your line - who keeps the stories that need to be kept?
(Kelli Jo Calvert 4:41pm March 12, 2009)
Jessica: last year I was at my sisters bedside when she passsed. It is very difficult to see that in writing....
The stories we shared and the love and laughter she gave to me is my story-beyond words.
(Dawn Raymer 4:59pm March 12, 2009)
As a journalist, I, too, have seen and heard just about everything. Not a lot shocks me, anymore.
(LuAnn Morgan 6:24pm March 12, 2009)
Kellie Jo--I guess omeone does have to tell the stories at the end of the line--but in a way that doesn't try to own them, as I suppose I was trying to take on my friend's. I was writing it for my satisfaction and not to save the story for her. That, I think, was what my teacher was trying to tell me.
Best,
J
(Jessica Inclan 10:59pm March 12, 2009)
As a young adult, death was not in any picture I knew. I felt quite invincible, so a finality was out of the picture. In middle age, I was touched more by the subject with relatives and friends that I knew passing on to the other side. What really got me to thinking was the fact everyone has secrets they never reveal, sometimes even to themselves. The deep secrets go with them to their grave.
(Alyson Widen 12:13pm March 13, 2009)