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Jennifer Bort Yacovissi | Five Traits That Make Characters Memorable

When you think about the books you’ve loved over the years, usually the book’s
characters are the reason why. Setting, tone, plot, and themes all contribute to
making a novel stand out, but I find that characters stick with the reader most.
In a good book, characters come to life for us. They are fully realized beings
we feel we know almost as well as any flesh and blood creatureβ€”they’re not
always people, after allβ€”in our own lives. For me, it is almost always a book’s
characters that make me truly love it and remember it.

In my own book, UP THE HILL TO HOME, every one of the main characters is an ancestor of mine. They were real people. Often, I’ve read diaries and letters that they wrote, and have heard many stories about them. Still, it was up to me as an author to breathe life into them and make them completely three-dimensional, and, I hope, memorable.

What are the traits that make a character memorable for you? Do you want your
characters perfect or flawed? Larger-than-life or Everyman? Exotic or familiar?
Let’s explore the five traits that make characters memorable.

1. Characters You Loveβ€”or Love to Hate Mysterious, scary, heroic, fascinating, aggravating, evil, charming, sexy: no matter the character you’re looking for, the best ones get a visceral reaction from their audience. It doesn’t even matter whether it’s β€œI loved her!” or β€œOh, I hated her!” Think of GONE GIRL. Author Gillian Flynn went for and achieved the β€œlove to hate” reaction in her readers, who couldn’t wait for friends to read the book so they could discuss their enthusiastic loathing of the characters without spoiling anything. The worst thing you can ever say about a character is not that you hated him but that you found him uninteresting. 2. Characters You Can Relate To When a character is familiar to you, especially when she reminds you of a person you already know and love, you’re primed to find that character memorable. Some of the most memorable are the ones who remind us of ourselves. I think many women identified with Bridget Jones, the hilariously flawed heroine of Helen Fielding’s BRIDGET JONES'S DIARY. As a kid, I loved Jo in Louisa May Alcott’s Little Women primarily because she so reminded me of me, or at least the β€œme” I wanted to be. 3. Characters You’d Like to Know Often a favorite character is one you’d really like to know in real life. You can picture trading stories over a glass of wine or cup of tea or just having a great conversation. As I got to know my own characters in UP THE HILL TO HOME, I found myself wanting to spend time with Charley Beck, a funny, easy-going guy who takes life as it comes. It’s also not uncommon to fall a bit in love with that one character you find oh so appealing. Edward Rochester, the mysterious and distant hero of Charlotte Bronte’s JANE EYRE, was the first character I ever remember swooning over. 4. Characters who are larger than life, perfect, or ideal

Many readers want to spend time with a character who’s bigger or better than the
people they actually know; after all, as a friend said, β€œI spend all my time
with real people. I want to spend my reading time with someone better!” Often,
these are the characters we find in genre fiction like romance (Rhett Butler),
spy (James Bond, Jason Bourne), and sci-fi/fantasy/dystopian lit (pick one). A
β€œperfect” character can have flawsβ€”typically exactly the right flaws that make
him even more attractive.

5. Characters who are completely believable This is the trait I’m most often drawn to in books that I truly love, and the one I strive to achieve when I write. I want to spend time with fully realized, three-dimensional people. Perhaps my favorite character of all timeβ€”and I know I’m not aloneβ€”is Atticus Finch, hero of Harper Lee’s timeless TO KILL A MOCKINGBIRD. For me, Finch hits all five of these traits: we’re viscerally drawn to him, he’s someone we’d like to know, he’s the best version of the person we’d all like to be, he is heroic in the best sense of an everyday person who stands up and does the unpopular right thing, and yet he is still completely believable.

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Who are your all-time favorite characters? Leave a comment below to be entered to win an ecopy of UP THE HILL TO HOME.

About UP THE HILL TO HOME

Cherished only child of Charley and Emma Beck, she is the unlikely issue of an
improbable union. Beloved wife of Ferd Voith, she is the happy mother of a tribe
of nine, and newly expecting her tenth. It is the family of her earliest dreams.

Seven forty-one, the house that Charley built on his little plot of farmland
just outside of Washington City in the District of Columbia, is the only home
she’s ever known. So vast before, the house seems to shrink with each new child,
until Charley wonders that they’re not all tumbling out of windows.

In a ritual established over so many babies, Lillie celebrates by having Ferd
bring down her memory box, a carefully collected treasure of the lives of those
she loves. She knows by heart every word of the letters, every entry of the
diaries, every detail of the photographs, and she traces them again with the
start of each new life, to instill a sense of place, of family, of history.

Emma’s miracle, Ferd’s universe, the beating heart of the household: When Lillie
is stricken in a fall, her memories tug at threads woven through a century as
the fabric of the family frays around her.

About Jennifer Bort Yacovissi

Jenny Yacovissi grew up in Bethesda, Maryland, just a bit farther up the hill
from Washington, D.C. Her debut novel, Up the Hill to Home, is a fictionalized
account of her mother’s family in the same region.

In addition to writing and reading historical and contemporary literary fiction,
Jenny is a reviewer for Washington Independent Review of Books and the
Historical Novel Society. She owns a small project management and engineering
consulting firm, and enjoys gardening and being on the water. Jenny lives with
her husband Jim in Crownsville, Maryland.

Comments

10 comments posted.

Re: Jennifer Bort Yacovissi | Five Traits That Make Characters Memorable

Characters that make me cry.
(Marissa Yip-Young 5:46am May 12, 2015)

My favorite are characters I love to hate
(Hope Clippinger 3:27pm May 12, 2015)

I still like Scarlett because she is strong and also spoiled.
(Leona Olson 10:23pm May 12, 2015)

anyone with a smart mouth
(MaryEllen Hanneman 3:08pm May 13, 2015)

What a interesting sounding story. And I thought that 2 children
could be a handful. Thanks for this opportunity.
(Nancy Luebke 3:02pm May 14, 2015)

I want to win this for my wife
(Thomas Collette 11:33pm May 14, 2015)

want it!
(Susan Gannon 8:41am May 15, 2015)

Cover looks like many of the lumber baron homes in Michigan.
(Richard Burr 11:32am May 15, 2015)

My favorite character is Fred Flintstone!!!!!! Funny
characters
(Renae Kelly 12:03pm May 15, 2015)

I love the Morrow family in Black Horse by Addison Kline I want
to be part of their family!
(Denise Austin 1:50pm May 15, 2015)

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