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Jillian Neal | What Makes for a Fantastic Romance - My Goals for Every Novel I Pen

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In my very opinionated opinion, there are a few key elements that make up an
epic romance story. Here are the 10 things I try to incorporate in every novel
I write:

1. Sexy heroes - Not necessarily muscle bound or a millionaire, nah, I want a guy that has earned whatever muscle he has, has dealt with some issues in his past that built his character, can carry on an intelligent conversation, and can dirty talk with the best of them. 2. Smart, strong heroines โ€“ I want a girl that can kick some serious ass either mentally, physically, or both. I want to see the fire in her. I want her soul to reflect in her actions. I believe every woman is beautiful, so her looks are irrelevant, itโ€™s her courage, confidence, and intelligence that keeps me interested. 3. A plausible plotline โ€“ Now, I will openly admit to being a HUGE Harry Potter fan. The plot doesnโ€™t have to be plausible only in our reality, but you have to make me believe whatever happens would really happen in the world thatโ€™s been created. 4. Sex Scenes โ€“ Sorry (well not really), but I want the full-blown, impassioned, love scene with all of the juicy details. If Iโ€™m being totally honest, I want several of these scenes. 5. Suspense โ€“ Now, I love romantic suspense as much as the next girl, but I love contemporary as well. I just want a hint of mystery about what is going to happen next be it catching a bad guy or revealing a huge secret between the hero and heroine. 6. Emotion โ€“ I want to fall in love with the characters. I want to know their thoughts, wishes, fears, and what makes them proud. I want to feel the emotions they experience on every page. 7. Love โ€“ I want the hero and heroine to act lovingly towards one another. I want the sweetness of that. The coffee in the morning, the tender care and concern over the otherโ€™s well-being, and for them to unify together in a common goal. 8. Humor โ€“ I know, I know some books just arenโ€™t meant to make you laugh, and thatโ€™s totally okay. I do enjoy even a scene or two that make me smile at whatever is going on. If I laugh to myself, thatโ€™s even better. 9. Education โ€“ I like to learn new things. In GYPSY HEAT, Grady Havens, the hero, is a charter boat captain. I had to learn a great deal about boating and fishing. Iโ€™m certainly no expert by any means, but I love it when an author does their research and imparts a little of what they learned onto me. I try to do that, too. 10. Happy Ending โ€“ This goes without saying, but I love that every romance novel gives me that satisfying happy ending where the hero and heroine have conquered the forces against them and get to live Happily Ever After.

About Jillian Neal

Jillian Neal is a New Adult author with a passion for passion. She writes strong character driven novels, told from the male perspective. Her guys arenโ€™t afraid to let us inside their minds or inside their bedrooms. Young love comes to life inside the authorโ€™s Realm, along with sinister crime fighting, mixed in with a hearty dose of family. The engaging adventures will stretch your mind and keep you coming back for more.

Jillian lives outside of Atlanta with her husband and children.

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About GYPSY HEAT

Nadya Montgomery was Gypsy Beachโ€™s own personal wild child. There was nothing she wouldnโ€™t do, especially when it came to Grady Havens. Until disaster struck and tore them apart. Desperate to protect Grady, she ran away from everything and everyone sheโ€™d ever known.

Fourteen years later, Nadya returns to the beach to try to rebuild some
semblance of her life out of her ex-husbandโ€™s shadow, but that means returning
to her past and seeing Grady Havens again.

Now a charter boat Captain constantly trying to put his past behind him, Grady
doesnโ€™t know what to make of Nadyaโ€™s return. All he knows is she was always
meant to be his, and he intends to make his claim. He wants her back in his
life and most certainly back in his bed.

When his entire family is threatened, heโ€™s caught between rekindling his
relationship with Nadya and protecting what belongs to him.

Together they try to rebuild what always should have been, but their pasts are determined to keep them ensnared. As passions ignite between them, they realize that even Grady may not be able to keep her safe this time.

Comments

5 comments posted.

Re: Jillian Neal | What Makes for a Fantastic Romance - My Goals for Every Novel I Pen

I'm really going to enjoy reading your latest book, because
after reading your posting, I know that you put a lot of
thought into every word you wrote. You're very thorough
with your thought process, and I agree with all of the
points that you made. Congratulations on your book, and I'm
sure it's going to do very well!!
(Peggy Roberson 10:07am August 25, 2015)

I enjoy so many things about Jillian Neal's books; the richness of the
details, the depth of the characters, the little glimpses into the secondary
characters. The "heroes" are real men; undeniably sexy and physical,
perfect in their own imperfect way. Love that the good guys are not 100%
good, wink, wink. Your "heroines" are this irresistible mixture of mature
women, sassy chicks, intuitive beings and wounded girls. And mercy, what
scorching hot, sexy times they have together!!! The beauty of Jillian Neal's
novels is in the journey her characters take in finding their Happy Ever
After; rarely predictable and always satisfying.
(Patty Nash 6:06pm August 25, 2015)

I love that these are her goals! She has met these goals with
all of her books too!! I love the way her books make me feel,
I love her characters and even love the HOT scenes!!
(Michelle Smith 6:43pm August 25, 2015)

Great characters, hot sex scenes, beliveable plots. love her
books!
(Sandra Gibson 9:31pm August 25, 2015)

Love the book. It is really hot! I love the story the way
it unfolds. I didn't even obsess about how it would end
another way like I do with other books. I ended perfectly
and I was so happy. The suspense with the romance and sex
parts were all equal in value, and couldn't be made
better. Everyone needs to read these books by Jillian
Neal. She has something in them for everyone, if they
just take the time to recognize and appreciate her
talent. :)
(Mikka Funk 11:50pm August 26, 2015)

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