Judi Fennell | I Could Use Some Magic
January 5, 2011
One of the hardest things about writing a story about magic is to have a
story. See, when you have magic, it can do anything. Magic can make all your
problems literally disappear. So how do you have something threaten your
characters when one blink of her eyes (or flick of her wrists) can make it all
go away? That was what I was faced with when I sold my genie series to my editor. I
pretty much sold the idea on, “I have this idea of a story along the lines of
I Dream of Jeannie meets Indiana Jones.” That was it; that was all
I had. I knew the genie, Eden, had been sentenced to her bottle for 3,000 years,
got out early, and then I heard the Indiana Jones’ theme music. That was it. So, yay! I sold a trilogy. Now I had to write it. And I quickly found out that
like genie wishes, magic is not all it’s cracked up to be. Sure, it sounds good,
but if the bad guy is after you, poof! make yourself invisible or take a
long vacation to the other side of the world. If the guy you’re in love with is
tied to a chair, facing a bolt of magic from the jealous vizier, just zap him
somewhere else. I had to come up with a way for magic not to solve everything, and that
gave me some sleepless nights until I realized that when Eden is accidentally
freed from her bottle, she cracks her head on the stopper of her bottle—a canary
diamond. Diamonds are some of the hardest things on earth, and certainly more so
than her head. Voila! Head injury equals screwy magic, and the only thing worse
than not having magic is having magic you can’t control. So not only did I come
up with a way to not have magic solve everything, but now it was the cause of
some troubles. One problem solved. But then came the fact that djinn mythology, as fun as it is in TV shows, is, at
its heart, part of a belief system. I was very sensitive to that fact as I was
writing the story, trying to steer clear of offending anyone. Then there was the language barrier. I knew I wanted to incorporate Arabic
Egyptian, Persian and other languages into the story since Eden is over 2000
years old and she would have spoken them. But the alphabet is totally different
from English, and I was a language major in college. While I don’t speak Arabic,
I know enough about languages to know that direct translations might mean
word-for-word what you want, but the meaning can be a whole other thing. I
needed a native Arabic speaker. That, actually, was the easiest part of my writing problems because my best
friend married an Egyptian guy who is a native speaker. Huge shout-out of thanks
to Tarek for his help with the language and for answering all my questions. I
might not have made a trip to the Sahara desert for research, but the trip to a
local Moroccan restaurant was a fabulous time! Google and Wikipedia are great for anecdotal type info I use, and then there’s
always books. I have a copy of Sir Richard Burton’s translation of the one
thousand and one Arabian nights’ stories, and the footnotes were just as
illuminating at the stories. I lived on Google Earth when laying out the magical
city of Al-Jannah, and pulled on my time spent in the south of Spain for
architecture. I had as much fun creating this world as I did with my Mer world, but I wouldn’t
have minded a genie who could have whipped it all up for me. But then where would the story have been for this post? Here’s a flavor of the world I created: “This way!” She grabbed Matt’s hand and ran through the back door of a salon.
A cloud of silvery-pink Glimmer hit her in the face so thickly as she entered
that she choked on it. “What the hell’s this stuff?” Matt coughed. “Glimmer,” Eden answered. “I thought you said no one was allowed to use magic?” Matt waved his arms and the pink particles drifted onto him. Only real men
could wear pink and still look sexy—not that now was the time to be thinking
about things like that. “The Mawla of Magic is always permitted to use magic,” answered a woman
shelving supplies in a cabinet by the back door. She turned around, smoothing
her aquamarine sari in a controlled motion that had nothing to do with wrinkles
and everything to do with sizing Matt up. And not in any way that made Eden
jealous. More in a way that made her nervous. The woman had pegged him for a tourist—the mortal kind. Attention they didn’t
need. They also didn’t need Matt asking any more questions, so Eden plastered a
smile to her face and reached for his hand. “Place looks great. Aisha did a
wonderful job.” She backed out of the room, dragging him with her, the woman’s eyes on them
all the way. “The Mawla of Magic?” Matt asked in the corridor. Eden peered around the corner. No one was watching for them. Yet. “The Mawla—Aisha—reports to the High Master along with Faruq and a few
others. She’s the Master of Necessary Magic. Things like droppings-free birds,
flying-carpet taxis, self-flaming street lanterns, that sort of thing. For the
common good.” The front of the store had Aisha’s Glimmer all over it. Fuchsia chiffon
ribbons spiraled and twirled above patrons who sat on fluffy cloud cushions and
bathed their feet in frothing mineral water baths scented with lemon blossoms.
Not quite sure how this constituted common good, but then it wasn’t Eden’s place
to question Aisha. She just wanted to get out of here without drawing any more
attention. Then Matt cursed, and, sadly, that wasn’t going to happen. Eden spun around as he was trying to prevent a metal basket of therapy stones
from swiveling off a brazier. He couldn’t, and the basket crashed onto the
parquet floor, charred wood quickly adding its own scent to the Glimmer and
lemon mixture. A fire would certainly get them more attention. “This place is designed for pixies,” he muttered, bending down to gather the
stones. “Not for. By.” Eden kicked a stone that had burnt a tiny hole in her
slipper, then nodded at a trio of the beings above the front window. Gossamer
gold wings fluttered as the pixies serenaded the clientele with sweet,
high-pitched melodies. “Pixies? Real, live pixies?” Matt stood up, the basket forgotten at his
feet. “They’re certainly not dead ones.” Thank the cosmos she hadn’t brought
Humphrey; pixies were a dragon treat. She just hoped he found the dragon colony
all right. She picked up the basket and returned it to the brazier. “Come on. Let’s
go.” She avoided crashing into a salver of mint tea and scones that served itself
to the clients, and dodged a broom dancing among the alabaster workstations as
if auditioning for Fantasia but couldn’t prevent the stupid curl of her
slipper from catching a curtain of lavender silk and tugging it from the
ceiling. It billowed behind her onto Matt. Poor guy didn’t have luck with that
fabric today. The naked woman on the massage table behind the curtain, however, probably
wouldn’t complain that he got a face full of silk. After she stopped cursing,
that was. Then Matt joined in with the cursing, and so did the henna artist he
accidentally tossed the fabric onto when he fought his way free. A couple more mishaps had Eden wishing they had time to make amends, but
their time was just about up. Someone was going to call the authorities about
the disturbance, and in Al-Jannah, all Service Officers reported to Faruq. Once Faruq learned she’d escaped, she could kiss any hope of freedom goodbye.
She’d been ready to say to hell with the consequences of using her magic and
wish herself free earlier in his courtyard, but then Matt’s truck had plowed
through the silk walls. For a moment, she’d thought he’d been a mirage brought
on by lack of sleep and fear of what Faruq had planned for her. The lack of
sleep she hadn’t minded, given how that had come about, but the fear… She had
Faruq to thank for the fear. She had to outwit him. Had to get away. The only thing worse than being in
The Service was being in The Service to him. Matt caught up to her and dragged her out of the way of a pot of yucca plants
that were laughing so hard the planter was in danger of toppling over, then out
the door and into the street, just in time to almost be run over by a carriage
that was being pulled by a— “Is that what I think it is?” Matt leapt back and Eden went with him, ending
up in his arms. The day wasn’t a total loss. © Judi Fennell, Sourcebooks Casablanca, 2011 I DREAM OF GENIES BY
JUDI FENNELL – IN STORES JANUARY 2011 “The nonstop cinematic gee-whiz results will keep the reader enraptured.
Fennell also tosses in sultry sex scenes, a bubble-gum-sweet but passionate
romance, quick-moving action, and a variety of puns and riddle-making
beasts.” —Publishers Weekly STARRED REVIEW He needs to change his luck, and fast! Matt Ewing would gladly hunt down a fortune in lucky pennies if he thought it
would help save his business. But for all his hoping, Matt’s clueless when his
long-awaited lucky charm falls in his lap in the form of a beguiling genie. He
just can’t believe that this beautiful woman could be the answer to his prayers… She’s been bottled up for far too long! Spending 2,000 years in a bottle would make any woman a little stir-crazy. So
when Matt releases Eden from her luxurious captivity, she’s thrilled to repay
him by giving him the magical boost he needs… But for all her good intentions, Eden’s magical prowess is a little rusty and
her magical mistakes become more than embarrassing. And though Eden knows
falling in love will end her magic and immortality, she can’t help but be drawn
to the one man who wants her just for herself… About the Author
Judi Fennell is an
award-winning author and writes what she calls “fairy tales with a twist.” Her
romance novels have been finalists in Gather.com's First Chapters and First
Chapters Romance contests, and have won numerous RWA Chapter Awards, including
the FF&P Prism Award, and the New Jersey Golden Leaf Award. Judi lives with
her family in suburban Philadelphia, PA, where she is working on the next book
in the Genie Trilogy, Genie Knows Best, set for release in November 2011.
For more information, please visit http://www.judifennell.com/.
Comments
54 comments posted.
Re: Judi Fennell | I Could Use Some Magic
This looks very interesting, I love books that have world building and and a bit of adventure. Can't wait to get my hands em :) (Dawn Vaeoso 3:33am January 5, 2011)
Your book sounds very interesting and one that I would enjoy reading. We can all use some adventure in our lives and a good way to have it is through reading. (Mary Christian 7:57am January 5, 2011)
good morning, Dawn and Mary! Thanks for stopping by and I hope you enjoy the (magic carpet) ride! ;) (Judi Fennell 9:20am January 5, 2011)
Congratulations! Great excerpt, I like your fun world! :) Magic and humor are always welcome and a must read! Happy New Year! (Eva Minaskanian 9:23am January 5, 2011)
I love the idea of a genie in a bottle! I can't wait to read it! (Susan Chase 9:34am January 5, 2011)
Happy new year to you, too, Eva!
Susan, it's more like a genie OUT OF a bottle. Which is the whole problem. ;) (Judi Fennell 9:45am January 5, 2011)
Congrats!!! I love the idea of this book. I will add it to my TBR pile :) (Leagh Christensen 10:37am January 5, 2011)
I can't wait to read the book, Judi! I'm really looking forward to it! (Robin Kaye 10:45am January 5, 2011)
Hi Leagh and Robin! thanks for stopping by! (Judi Fennell 11:24am January 5, 2011)
Oh, this looks as if it's going to laugh out loud hilarious! And sizzling! What a great solution you came up with for the magic! (Kat Sheridan 11:25am January 5, 2011)
Oh they sound like a bunch of entertaining characters!!! Sounds like a great read!!! (Colleen Conklin 12:08pm January 5, 2011)
This id going to be a great book to read. I can not wait to read it. (Anthonia Sharp 12:17pm January 5, 2011)
Thanks for checking it out, Kat, Colleen and Anthonia. Hope you all enjoy the (magic carpet) ride! :) (Judi Fennell 12:21pm January 5, 2011)
This book is going to be interesting and fun to read. (Anthonia Sharp 12:48pm January 5, 2011)
Dreams, passion, romance, i am going to love this book. (Anthonia Sharp 1:06pm January 5, 2011)
Dreams, passion, romance, i am going to love this book. (Anthonia Sharp 1:06pm January 5, 2011)
Magic, love, hope, dreams, everything that makes a great book. (Anthonia Sharp 1:36pm January 5, 2011)
love romance, i know i am going to love this book. (Anthonia Sharp 1:57pm January 5, 2011)
Nice job of world building. I like all of the details you've included in the excerpt; clearly your research has added a lot of color to the story. (James Rafferty 2:02pm January 5, 2011)
I love books and i love to read, and i love to write. This book has a very good excerpt and i know i am going to love the book (Anthonia Sharp 2:09pm January 5, 2011)
I loved I Dream of Jeannie when I was a kid and love the idea of "borrowing" the theme. I am looking forward to this book and the 2 that will follow. (Cheryl Ricin 3:01pm January 5, 2011)
I like the idea of magic that goes wrong (Sandy Giden 3:25pm January 5, 2011)
Thank you so much for sharing with us... I so want to read this story...
Kelly (Kelly Mueller 3:33pm January 5, 2011)
Thank you for writing this book, Judi! Definitely a book I want to read.
Eden and Matt's story sounds like it will be hilarious. Add addled genie to man for love and loads of laughter. (Cathy Phillips 4:02pm January 5, 2011)
Oh, does this book sound like fun---and to think, we just got TVLand on our cable TV and I Dream of Jeannie is on every day, too---I'll be having much fun with magic, both reading and watching. (Sue Farrell 4:05pm January 5, 2011)
Sounds great. Would love to read it. (Clicia Tremblay 4:20pm January 5, 2011)
I love magic in my stories. Having to write it - I wish you every success!! (Mary Preston 4:24pm January 5, 2011)
Since I really enjoyed the first two of your Mer trilogy (that I somehow managed to win somewhere - THANK YOU!), I still need to get the third one of it, and then get this one too! I really do enjoy your writing!!
Later,
Lynn (Lynn Rettig 4:33pm January 5, 2011)
Love the premise. You have quite some imagination to dream of genies and the art of magic. The book sounds enticing. (Alyson Widen 4:36pm January 5, 2011)
The book sounds interesting and I really love the title! (Amanda Boyer 4:49pm January 5, 2011)
A little bit of magic is always a good thing. This new series sounds fun. (Maude Allen 4:55pm January 5, 2011)
What fun!!! A different kind of paranormal that can make you laugh, root for the hero, sympathize with the heroine and long for the perfect solution all in one. Wow! Please keep writing. (Sandra Spilecki 6:22pm January 5, 2011)
It looks like a fun story! (Maureen Emmons 6:47pm January 5, 2011)
I can't wait to get my own copy of this one! It sounds terrific! Congrats on your release. Love the excerpt you gave us. It lured me right in and kept me so there! (Wanda Hughes 7:07pm January 5, 2011)
So funny! I hope the rest of the series is as entertaining! (Diane Sadler 7:08pm January 5, 2011)
The book sounds fabulous and I would love to read it! Thanks for the opportunity! (Brenda Rupp 7:12pm January 5, 2011)
Wow! This is really different. I loved 'I Dream of Jeannie' and a loved the humor in the excerpt. (Diane Sallans 8:04pm January 5, 2011)
I grew up watching I Dream Of Jeannie and loved it. So a story with magic that can't be controled is right in with that line (Patricia Kasner 9:11pm January 5, 2011)
James - Hi! Cheryl - I hope you enjoy the series. Sandy - Unfortunately, Eden and Matt aren't too fond of that idea. LOL. Kelly - and I want you to, too :) Cathy - you're welcome. Thank you for reading it! Sue - yay for TVLand! Clicia - Thanks! Mary - magic can be both a blessing and a curse - for the characters AND the author. ;) Lynn - *waving hi! Lucky you! You'll have to let me know how you enjoyed Angel and Logan's story. Alyson - my imagination kept me out of a lot of trouble as a kid. I used to blame everything on Casper the Friendly Ghost and Mom would be laughing too much to punish me. LOL Amanda - Thanks for stopping by. I love the title, too. Maude - Hope you enjoy the (magic carpet) ride! Sandra - I will! Here's hoping my editor keeps buying! :) Maureen - it was fun to write. Wanda - smooches, hon! Diane - (me, too, since I have yet to finish #3 or get edits on #2...) Brenda - thanks for checking the story out! Diane - definitely NOT your typical paranormal... and if that isn't an oxymoron, I don't know what is... Patricia - I'm with you, but Eden and Matt would have preferred not to have had to deal with screwy magic. (Judi Fennell 9:36pm January 5, 2011)
Everyone could use a little magic in their lives - Can't wait to read. (Linda Leonard 9:49pm January 5, 2011)
I read the first two books in the trilogy and loved them. The 2ndary characters were as charming and laugh out load funny as the main ones. Super series! (Lisa Richards 10:11pm January 5, 2011)
Sounds like a fun book! I read about your book on Jennifer Estep's blog a few days ago and thought it sounded great! (Yuka Liew 10:20pm January 5, 2011)
Linda - I heartily agree about the magic. But let me know if you still think like that after reading the story. LOL
Lisa - aw, thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed them!
Yuka - Jennifer is a sweetheart! I was so thrilled that my publisher used her quote for the back cover! (Judi Fennell 10:59pm January 5, 2011)
From what I've read so far, you've made you're book come alive more than I Dream of Jeannie, or watching Indiana Jones!! I could picture, in my minds' eye, being there, and watching the two of them, running in the streets, with the calamity befalling them!! You have a pleasant and expressive way of telling a story, and I'm really looking forward to reading your trilogy!! The pixies were a cute touch as well as the laughing yucca plants. Have a wonderful New Year!! (Peggy Roberson 11:22pm January 5, 2011)
Would love to read this book. It sounds entertaining and funny. (Ginger Hinson 11:38pm January 5, 2011)
Ah, Peggy, I'm so glad you could be in the scene with them! Happy New Year to you, too!
Ginger - thanks so much for stopping by! (Judi Fennell 8:28am January 6, 2011)
What a fun idea for a book and I;m sure it's going to be a hit. Happy New Year (Vickie Hightower 9:09am January 6, 2011)
Magic? I would love your book. It sounds like a fun read. Thank you. (Barbara Ryan 12:24pm January 6, 2011)
Genis. Finally a new character/subject to read! Can't wait!!! (Michele Powell 1:14pm January 6, 2011)
Looks like a fun read with great action too. (Carol Drummond 3:15pm January 6, 2011)
Sounds like fun! I'd love to read one of your books. Congrats on the release! (Molly Wilsbacher 7:12pm January 6, 2011)
Hi ladies. Thanks so much for stopping by! (Judi Fennell 8:38am January 7, 2011)
i love genies, and i love magic. (Anthonia Sharp 11:20am January 8, 2011)
Another delightful series. I have your mer series and can't wait to get the genie series and read it. It is delightful to have the wit and humor you inject into the stories. Good luck with the release. (Patricia Barraclough 7:00pm January 10, 2011)
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