Pride and Prejudiceβs Elizabeth Bennet despises Mr. Darcy for his
judgmental haughtiness. In
Bridget Jonesβ Diary, the modern-day
retelling of that novel, Bridget initially experiences the same disdain for the
formal barrister, Mark Darcy, for similar reasons. Why, then, do we immediately
feel a charge of excitement over the possibility that the hero and heroine might
fall for each other during the course of the book?
If we stop for a moment and imagine such a relationship in real life, would we
feel that same spark? Try it. If you arenβt already single, imagine you are, for
purposes of this question. Your wonderful spouse does not exist and is not an
option for you. Is it realistic for youβif you consider someone who truly rubs
you the wrong wayβto imagine you might fall in love with that person eventually?
Probably not.
All four of the novellas in the
IN LOVE AND WAR collection
(Mountain Brook Ink, 2016) unfold stories about rivals and romance. Why do they
work?
Sometimes the rivalry exists professionally, so what spills over into the
personal is actually off center. Our heroine might want to focus on professional
animosity but may be unwillingly drawn into personal common ground as the story
progresses. If the personal strengths and endearing characteristics of a hero
become so obvious the heroine canβt ignore them, sheβs going to struggle to
maintain her contempt. And then . . .?
Or perhaps the conflict rests on past experience between the protagonists. Was
the hero a cad years ago? A bad-enough history can leave a lasting taste in the
mouth. But if our cad has mended his waysβespecially in an Inspirational story,
where that mending might be the result of newfound faithβour heroine will be
hard pressed to refuse to forgive behaviors long repented. And forgiveness can
open up other levels of acceptanceβmaybe even romantic love.
In other scenarios, the rivalry is in the eye of the beholder, meaning the
heroine may be completely wrong about the hero. Sheβs misunderstood something
about him that sheβs stubbornly embraced as fact. Sheβs chosen to color him in
dark hues and has blinded herself to his warmer shades out of prejudice,
immaturity, or fear. If sheβs physically attracted to him, that fear can be
intense. We may judge her for her imperfection, but if we witness her humbling
herself, we might identify with her just a little.
Which is what can make a rivalry romance work. If we can imagine ourselves in
the protagonistβs place, such a romance is quite a compelling and fulfilling read.
Award-winning novelist Trish Perry has written twelve inspirational romances
for Harvest House Publishers, Summerside Press, Barbour Publishing,
Forget-Me-Not Romances, and Mountainbrook Ink. She has co-authored three
devotionals for Summerside and one for Broadstreet Publishing. She has served as
a columnist and as a newsletter editor over the years, as well as a 1980s
stockbroker and a board member of the Capital Christian Writers organization in
Washington, D.C. She holds a degree in Psychology.
Trishβs latest
contemporary romance, More Than Meets the Eye, in In Love and War, releases June
2016.
Lassoed by Love
By Miralee Ferrell
Designed with Love
By Kimberly Rose Johnson
More Than Meets the Eye
By Trish Perry
Jensy St. Martin is not pleased when she recognizes the latest ad man to join
the Washington, D. C. agency she has long considered her professional home. Phil
Quinn was a cocky, love-βem-and-leave-βem type when they attended the same high
school ten years ago, and she senses he hasnβt changed much since then. When the
two ad designers are forced to work together on a campaign, Jensy learns more
than she wants to know about the man, and his growing attractiveness becomes the
least of her worries.
Hungry Hearts
By Debby Mayne
When Cameron Prater returns to Hyacinth, South Carolina, to open a restaurant
a few doors down from his childhood sweetheart Melissa Shaw's diner, they are
both reminded of the fierce competitiveness that drove them apart. They even try
to outdo each other while volunteering for a women's shelter that their church
sponsors, and they deny the fact that the sparks that brought them together
years ago still zing. Can these two people put aside their rivalryβand their
prideβand let their hearts take over?
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