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MJ Flournoy | A Matter of Trust

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What's in a name? Funny you should ask. Apparently where my characters are
concerned, it's everything. I try not to obsess over selecting my characters'
names and for good reason, I almost always get them wrong. You see, my
characters talk to me, at me, or not at all. It's the not at all that causes the
problem. When my characters don't talk to me, they don't talk to each other and
the story doesn't get written. Some people might call it writer's block, I call
it aggravating. I had this great idea for a romantic suspense novel, but the
hero would not talk. It didn't matter how man writer's tricks I used, he refused
to budge. Not one line of dialogue would he utter.

In my mind's eye I could see him standing bare-chested, arms folded across his
muscular torso and glaring at me. I glared back and challenged this impressively
built hot hunk, "What gives, we've got a story to write, you've got a heroine to
seduce, come on Jack, get a move on."

His eyes narrowed in that dangerous way that causes a woman's blood to sing.
"Make me," they challenged.

Not to be out done by a figment of my own imagination, I type a line.

He scoffed.

It sucked. I backspaced, delete, delete, sniff, delete.

His gaze softened.

I'd found his weak spot, another sniff for good measure.

"You don't even know my name," he whispered.

Really? That was it, he didn't like the name I'd chosen? "What is it then?" I
asked.

"Mac."

The word nearly curled toes. The man was everything I would want in a hero.
After all, I had created him.

With a few keystrokes I changed his name and the dialogue began to flow.

"Hell." Mac Carlson hit speed dial for a second time, one white knuckled hand gripped the steering wheel. Crap like this didn't happen on his watch. Carlson Group, though new in Atlanta, ranked number one in the security business.
Those word open A MATTER OF TRUST and introduce Mac Carlson, ex-Navy SEAL and loner, the wounded hero with trust issues who abducts school teacher Jolie Wyngate. A MATTER OF TRUST is a romantic suspense with paranormal elements. I enjoyed writing this book because, as they say, "it was ripped from the headlines." The idea came after seeing a report of a woman who intervened and called the police when she saw a child she thought had been kidnapped. The woman literally saved a child's life.

My character, Jolie, is a teacher with psychic abilities. Using those abilities
cost her dearly, but when a child is kidnapped she has to team up with hot, sexy
hero Mac Carlson to rescue the child. Mac is an ex-Navy SEAL and a loner. Can
they learn to trust each other and work together to save the little girl?

A MATTER OF TRUST

A MATTER OF
TRUST

Her paranormal abilities had always caused her grief. But can they save the life of a child who has been spirited away fro her parents and the life of the man she loves?

Jolie Wyngate is a middle school teacher with an extraordinary gift—or is
it a curse? Throughout her life, she's been never been sure. Now, when she is
implicated in the disappearance of a child, the ultimate value of her powers
will be put to the test.

Mac Carlson, former Navy SEAL and security expert, is tasked with rescuing the
girl, Rachael Anne. From the moment he meets Jolie, his suspicious and
protective nature sets its sights on her as a prime suspect. Can Jolie clear her
name and gain this man's hard-won trust?

More importantly, can she save the girl before time runs out? She won't be able
to do it without her psychic abilities—but Mac has a hard enough time
trusting Jolie as it is, let alone trusting her powers to lead them to Rachael Anne.

As Mac and Jolie realize they have no choice but to work as a team—and as
they slowly warm to each other in the process—they realize they have a new
problem: the man they are after has set his sights on Jolie. Now Jolie will need
all of her abilities, and all of Mac's strength and skill, to stay out of the
fiend's hands and bring Rachael Anne back home.

Comments

3 comments posted.

Re: MJ Flournoy | A Matter of Trust

Hi, MJ! I use the first name that pops into my head for a character, but often it's just a placeholder until I find the right name. Hurray for Find/Replace!

It's awesome that your story idea came from real life! (And fun how you found Mac's soft spot.)
(Barbara Monajem 4:24pm November 23, 2013)

I remember having a conversation with MJ about characters and names!
(Mary Marvella 9:35pm November 23, 2013)

Love the wordless conversation about naming the character. ;-
) A Matter Of Trust sounds great!
(Glenda Martillotti 12:45pm November 24, 2013)

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