Names in fiction, as in life, are important. While they may not tell you what
sort of person someone is, they can tell a lot about where/when they were born.
Tarquin and Fred may have been born at the same time, but I suspect into very
different families. Diminutives maybe hint a little at the person –
someone who insists on being called Anthony is probably a very different Anthony
who tells everyone to ‘Call me Tone.'
So in fiction, what your character is called is a reflection of when and where
he's born. Sometimes the characters tell me their names – in my first
book, Ilfayne just turned up with the name. Sometimes I give the character a
placeholder name, and it sticks – in my second book (and the first where
he was a secondary character) Hunter was named that as a placeholder, mainly at
my husband's insistence he be ‘Like Triple H, Hunter Hearst Helmsley. Only more
badass'. It stuck. Only, Hunter's a duke and it didn't really fit his background
or culture, so I had to come up with a reason he was given the nickname, because
he refused to be called by his given name. Sometimes I flounder for a name, and
my husband is used to quickfire demands like ‘I need a good name for a pirate,
now!', which gave the world Van Gast.
In my latest release, my hero started off with a very different name. I was
walking around a fjord in Norway when the character turned up. I knew he didn't
speak – silent like the mountains, and like them with secrets to keep. I
knew he had a gammy leg, making the path by the waterfall tricky, especially in
winter. And I knew his name; Hrolf. I liked it, and it suited him and his
solitary nature (the word means wolf in Old Norse).
Only then I sent the book off to beta readers – other writers who look at
it with fresh eyes to find flaws I may have missed. And one came back with
‘Every time I try to pronounce the name in my head, it sounds like my cat
sicking up a furball. Plus I'm not entirely sure I'm pronouncing it right'.
Now, coming from a fantasy background, I know the importance of a name that is
easily read/sounded. Hrolf, bless his cotton socks, needed a change of name.
Have you ever looked at a list of Old Norse names? Unless you're aware of the
pronunciations (I am, which is why the name Hrolf didn't trip me), to an English
reader, it can look a little like someone spilled the scrabble bag. I'd had
enough trouble with the secondary characters, making sure their names were easy
on the eye. But Hrolf…Hrolf had to have a good name.
Why is why it took me longer to decide on his new name than it did to do the
edits my editor sent me. But I think it works, and it suits him. Einar, the lone
warrior.
Anyway, THE VIKING'S
SACRIFICE is now available from Carina
Press, or Amazon.
Here's the blurb:
Viking raiders destroyed Wilda's home. She witnessed the murder of her mother
and would have been killed herself if it weren't for the Viking boy Einar, who
saved her from his ruthless brother. The blood and murder left Wilda cold and
shorn of feeling.
Eight years later, the heathens return for Wilda. As a captive in the Viking
village, she finds protection and silent comfort in the man who once gallantly
saved her.
Einar has been cursed to silence by his brother. With the dark net of his
brother's power cast over their village, silence is a small price to pay for his
family's safety. But Einar is immediately drawn to Wilda, and the need to
protect her from his brother awakens his Viking courage. Can Einar break his
brother's curse in time to save the village and the woman he loves?
So, what are your favourite names for heroes? And what names would make you
think twice?
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3 comments posted.
Your question sort of threw me for a loop, because you're asking for names off the top of my head. From books I've read recently, names like Ranger, or Rhett would come to mind for heroes. Names that would make me think twice would be like Billy. I can't give you a Norse name, because that isn't my normal genre of book to read.
(Peggy Roberson 10:13am January 9, 2012)
Thank you for a great post! As a reader, character names can make or break a story for me. I love dark and dangerous heroes and I just can't picture a tough hero with a name like Chuck or Carl.
I have read books where I couldn't pronounce a name and sadly just created a new sound or word to replace the name each time I came across it. So for me names really do make a difference. A couple of names that ring nicely for me would be Frehr, Sindri and Terje.
(Christine Stack 10:13am January 10, 2012)
I think the reason you had so much trouble picking a name for your hero is that one is supposed to live up to a name. Common ones don't get me excited unless they're whispered in a love scene.
(Alyson Widen 4:51pm January 11, 2012)