June 23rd, 2026
Home | Log in!
Welcome to FreshFiction

Are you a reader
or an author?

Help us personalize your experience. Choose your role below.
You can always change this later using the switcher button.

or

You can switch anytime using the floating button.

Limited Time Fresh Fiction Access

Exclusive Marketing Opportunities for Authors

Curious about how Fresh Access helps authors gain more visibility and connect with active readers?

Discover premium promotional opportunities, enhanced exposure, and author-focused services designed to help your books stand out.

Read More →
On Top Shelf
Fresh Pick
A SCAR IN THE BONE
★ Fresh Access for Authors 📚 New Books This Week 📰 Latest News 🎪 Reader Games

Love, Danger, Homecomings & Heart β€” Your June Reading Escape Starts Here

Slideshow image


Since your web browser does not support JavaScript, here is a non-JavaScript version of the image slideshow:

slideshow image
One disastrous night. One devastating man. One diabolical proposition.


slideshow image
He’s stubborn. She’s tougher. His kid? Already picked the bride.


slideshow image
A small-town second chance wrapped in danger, desire, and Sharon Sala heart.


slideshow image
She came home to save the ranch… and found the cowboy she never forgot.


slideshow image
From reality TV heartbreak to real-life reinvention.


slideshow image
A missing twin. A deadly cartel. One K-9 team caught in the crossfire.


CHASING PERFECT

Chasing Perfect, May 2010
Fools Gold #1
by Susan Mallery

HQN Books
Featuring: Charity Jones; Josh Golden
384 pages
ISBN: 0373774524
EAN: 9780373774524
Kindle: B0084ZZ6AM
Mass Market Paperback / e-Book
Add to Wish List

Purchase

"Fool's Gold series is going to be worth its weight in GOLD!"

Fresh Fiction Review

CHASING PERFECT
Susan Mallery

Reviewed by Sandi Shilhanek
Posted April 24, 2010

Romance Contemporary

If you can't afford a real getaway this month, then perhaps you'd like to go on an imaginary trip. I would suggest the little town of Fool's Gold...but be warned if you're looking for a romantic fling of your own there is a man shortage, and you'll have to satisfy yourself with reading the story of Charity Jones, and Josh Golden.

Along the way you're bound to meet some of the other residents of the town, and get drawn into their lives as well, and if you're anything like me when you close the last pages of CHASING PERFECT you're going to be marking the days on the calendar until you can get Susan Mallery's next release in your hands.

Charity was raised by a rather unconventional mom, and wanted nothing more than the ability to settle in once place and plant some roots. Josh also had an unusual upbringing, and overcame not only some of the emotional battles that Charity did, but also some physical ones to become a world class athlete.

Now, both are residing in Fools Gold and still have some issues to overcome, but if I were to tell you what those were then you would really have no need to read CHASING PERFECT for yourselves, and I would be taking away your chance to escape for a few hours.

I personally love ongoing series books, and have enjoyed Susan Mallery for the last several years. I believe with the creation of Fool's Gold she has done for herself what Robyn Carr did when she created Virgin River...given herself a town that readers can feel good about, and allow it to grow with new industry and bring readers back for new stories, and reunions with favorite characters.

CHASING PERFECT has a perfect blend of humor, romance, and even a bit of a mystery. I do believe that like me, you'll be enjoying your time in Fool's Gold, and be ready for more.

Learn more about CHASING PERFECT

SUMMARY

There is only one thing wrong with the charming community of
Fool’s Gold, California: the men don’t stick around!

This problem has to be fixed, fast, and Charity Jones may be
just the city planner up to the challenge. Charity
immediately falls in love with all the storybook town has to
offer – except its sexy, famous world-class cyclist Josh
Golden. With her long list of romantic disasters she’s not
about to take a chance on another bad boy…but it may just be
what they both need!

EXCERPT

Charity Jones loved a good disaster movie as much as the
next personβ€”she would simply prefer the disaster in
question not be about her life.

The sharp crack of an electrical short, followed by a
burning smell, filled the conference room on the third
floor of City Hall. A thin wisp of smoke rose from her
laptop, pretty much ending any hope of her Powerpoint
presentation going smoothly. The presentation she’d stayed
up nearly all night perfecting.

It was her first day on the job, she thought,
breathing deeply to ward off panic. The first official hour
of her first official day. Didn’t she get at least a
sixteenth of a break? Some small sign of mercy from the
universe?

Apparently not.

She glanced from her still smoldering computer to the
ten member board from California University, Fool’s Gold
campus, and they did not look happy. Part of the reason was
they’d been working with the previous city planner for
nearly a year and still hadn’t come up with a contract for
the new research facility. A contract she was now
responsible for bringing to life. She would guess the
unpleasant burny smell was the other reason they were
shifting in their seats.

β€œPerhaps we should reschedule the meeting,” the head
guy said. He was tall, with graying hair and glasses. Mr.
Berman. β€œWhen you’re more...” He motioned to the smoldering
computer. β€œPrepared.”

Charity smiled warmly when what she really wanted to
do was throw something. She was prepared. She’d been on the
job all ofβ€”she glanced at the clock on the wallβ€”eight
minutes, but she’d been prepping since she accepted the
position as city planner nearly two weeks ago. She
understood what the university wanted and what the town had
to offer. She might be new, but she was still damned good
at her job.

Her boss, the mayor, had warned her about this group
and had offered to put off the meeting, but Charity had
wanted to prove herself. Something she refused to let be a
mistake.

β€œWe’re all here,” she said, still smiling as
confidently as possible. β€œWe can do this the old fashioned
way.”

She unplugged her computer and took it out into the
hall where it would no doubt stink up the rest of the
building, but her first priority had to be the meeting. She
was determined to start her new job with a win and that
meant getting California University at Fool’s Gold to sign
on the bottom line.

When she stepped back into the conference room, she
walked over to the dry erase board and picked up a thick
blue pen from the small rack attached to the board.

β€œThe way I see it,” she began, writing the number one
and circling it, β€œThere are three sticking points. First,
the length of the lease.” She wrote a number two, β€œSecond,
the reversion of improvements on the land. Namely the
building itself. And three, the freeway off-ramp signal.”
She turned back to the ten well-dressed people watching
her. β€œDo you agree?”

They all looked to Mr. Berman, who nodded slowly.

β€œGood.” Charity had reviewed all the notes on the
previous meetings and talked to the mayor of Fool’s Gold
over the weekend. What Charity couldn’t figure out was why
the negotiating process was taking so long. Apparently the
previous city planner had wanted to be right more than he
wanted the research facility in town. But Mayor Marsha
Tilson had been very clear when she’d offered Charity the
jobβ€”bring businesses to Fool’s Gold and fast.

β€œHere’s what I’m prepared to offer,” she said, making
a second column. She went through all three problems and
listed solutions, including an extra five seconds of left
turn time on the signal at the top of the off-ramp.

The board members listened and when she was done,
they once again looked at Mr. Berman.

β€œThat does sound good,” he began.

Sound good? It was better than good. It was a once-in-
a-lifetime deal. It was everything the university had asked
for. It was zero calorie brownie with ice cream.

β€œThere’s still one problem,” Mr. Berman said.

β€œWhich is?” she asked.

β€œFour acres on the county line.” The voice came from
the doorway.

Charity turned and saw a man entering the conference
room. He was tall and blond, good-looking to the point of
being almost another species, and he moved with an easy
athletic grace that made her feel instantly awkward. While
he looked vaguely familiar, she was sure they’d never met
before.

He gave her a quick smile. The flash of teeth, the
millisecond of attention, nearly knocked her into the wall.
Who was that guy?

β€œBernie,” the stranger said, turning the mega-watt
grin on the group leader. β€œI heard you were in town. You
didn’t call me for dinner.”

Mr. Berman actually looked interested. β€œI thought
you’d be busy with your latest conquest.”

Blond guy shrugged modestly. β€œI always have time for
anyone from the university. Sharon. Martin.” He greeted
everyone else at the table, shook a few hands, winked at
the old lady at the end, then turned back to Charity.

β€œSorry to interrupt. You come highly recommended and
under normal circumstances could deal with this problem
without breaking a sweat. But there’s something you don’t
know. The reason we don’t have a deal isn’t the lease
reversion or the traffic light.” He moved close and took
the pen from her hand. β€œIt’s the four acres the university
has been offered by a very wealthy alumni family. They want
their name on the building and they’re willing to pay for
that privilege.”

He flashed another smile at Charity, then turned back
to the Board. β€œI’m going to explain why that’s a bad idea.”

And then he started talking. She had no idea who he
was and probably should have told him to get out, but she
couldn’t seem to move or speak. It was as if he projected
some space alien force field that kept her immobilized.

Maybe it was his eyes, she thought, gazing into the
hazel green depths. Or his sun-bleached lashes. It might
have been the way he moved or the heat she felt every time
he walked by her. Or maybe she’d simply inhaled some weird
gas when her computer had sparked, flamed out and died.

While she enjoyed a boy-girl encounter as much as the
next woman, she’d never been mesmerized by a man before.
Certainly not during a professional meeting that she was
supposed to be running.

She knew the type, though. Had seen the power of the
havoc they brought with them everywhere they went. Self-
preservation stated she should stay far, far away. And she
would...just as soon as the meeting was over.

Videos

BOOK SERIES

Fool's Gold

Chasing Perfect
CHASING PERFECT
#1.0 β€’ May 2010
Almost Perfect
ALMOST PERFECT
#2.0 β€’ July 2010
Finding Perfect
FINDING PERFECT
#3.0 β€’ September 2010
Only Mine
ONLY MINE
#4.0 β€’ August 2011
Only Yours
ONLY YOURS
#5.0 β€’ September 2011
Only His
ONLY HIS
#6.0 β€’ October 2011
Summer Days
SUMMER DAYS
#7.0 β€’ June 2012
Only Us
ONLY US
#7.5 β€’ November 2011
Summer Nights
SUMMER NIGHTS
#8.0 β€’ July 2012
All Summer Long
ALL SUMMER LONG
#9.0 β€’ August 2012
A Fool's Gold Christmas
A FOOL'S GOLD CHRISTMAS
#9.5 β€’ October 2012
Just One Kiss
JUST ONE KISS
#10.0 β€’ June 2013
Two of a Kind
TWO OF A KIND
#11.0 β€’ July 2013
Three Little Words
THREE LITTLE WORDS
#12.0 β€’ August 2013
Christmas on 4th Street
CHRISTMAS ON 4TH STREET
#12.5 β€’ October 2013
When We Met
WHEN WE MET
#13.0 β€’ May 2014
Before We Kiss
BEFORE WE KISS
#14.0 β€’ May 2014
Until We Touch
UNTIL WE TOUCH
#15.0 β€’ July 2014
Marry Me At Christmas
MARRY ME AT CHRISTMAS
#19.0 β€’ October 2015
Best of My Love
BEST OF MY LOVE
#20.0 β€’ May 2016

 

 

 

© 2003-2026 off-the-edge.net  all rights reserved Privacy Policy