"The third book in the Offspring series leads our hero to question everything"
Reviewed by Rosie B
Posted August 19, 2010
Romance Paranormal
With the psychic ability to find lost objects and people,
Nicholas Braden is the perfect fit for a clandestine
government program that specializes in finding terrorists.
At least that's what he's led to believe. Recently Nicholas
has started having doubts about the programs leader,
Darkwell, and what his true mission is within the secret
operation. Since Darkwell refuses to give him any answers,
Nicholas finds he has no choice but to turn to the very
people Darkwell is working to capture, a group that calls
themselves the Rogues.
As Nicholas tries to identify the good side and the
bad side, he's also getting closer to Darkwell's assistant,
Olivia. With secrets of her own that she'll do anything to
keep, Olivia finds her loyalties starting to split, but the
self proclaimed good girl also would never break the rules,
no matter what. With time running out and Nicholas growing
frantic about not only his safety but also Olivia's, he has
to convince her he's not trying to deceive her before it
ends up costing them their lives.
TOUCHING DARKNESS is the third book in Jaime Rush's
Offspring series. While visiting familiar characters
from the series was a definite plus, I found I could not get
into Nicholas and Olivia's story. Though well written, I
just didn't feel the connection between the lead pair. I
know Olivia's character was supposed to be an
obedient kind of girl, but after a while
her tendency to keep her head-in-the-sand got to be
extremely frustrating. At times, Nicholas' efforts to save
her felt pointless since you can't save someone
who doesn't see the need for saving.
That having been said, if you have previously read this
series, then you should absolutely check out TOUCHING
DARKNESS. There is a lot that happens in regards to the
storyline
which sets up some new twists and offers a few answers. If
you are new to these books, I suggest you start at the
beginning. Though TOUCHING DARKNESS was definitely not what
I would deem a keeper, it is absolutely worth reading if you
enjoy the series.
SUMMARY
Nicholas Braden, a psychic spy in a covert government
program, suspects he's a pawn in a mad man's quest for
justice. His boss's stunning assistant is too loyal to give
him answers, but Olivia's secret, wild side bends his mind
and fires his body. As they edge closer to the darkest
truth, good and evil blur, threatening their very survival.
ExcerptNicholas
returned to the estate, his head buzzing with what Zoe and
Rand had
told him. He'd been shocked at seeing the faces to match
the pictures
he'd been working on finding for weeks now. More shocked
because they
hadn't looked or acted like terrorists. They were in their
twenties,
like him, and aside from their obvious distrust and
wariness, a lot
like him.
He
knew something for sure: Darkwell had lied about their
intentions. If
they'd gone to his house to kill him, why had they not
taken him out
then?
From
the beginning, Darkwell hadn't lived up to his side of the
arrangement,
making excuses and promises. Dishonesty was usually a
dealbreaker, but
he understood that the government sometimes had secrets it
couldn't
share with the general public. This program was one of
those secrets.
But now…now he knew he was being lied to personally. He'd
walk, screw
the money and his obligation, forget that he always saw a
job through
to the best of his ability. Before he could do that,
though, he had
to find out the truth. Not because it involved him; it
involved his
father, a man he had no memory of. A man whose death had
shattered his
mother's heart.
He
waited until the armed guard opened the gate. The mansion
was a hell
of a lot better than that creepy asylum. Darkwell had paid
him a lot
of money to participate in this program, more to reside on
site. Nicholas
wanted control over what jobs he worked, whose stuff he
retrieved. He
wanted more time to help Bone Finders, a non-profit that
pulled mostly
law-enforcement resources to find the remains of the
missing. He could
only do so many of those missions a year, though. Finding
lost ships,
equipment, even the remains of classified experimental
aircraft was
simple. The more emotions that were tied to the missing
article, the
more of a toll it took on him. Finding a child's bones, for
instance,
sucked out his energy for a week. It was worth it,
though.
He
nodded to the guard at the front door and drove inside. The
place had
the smell of old wood and older money. Rich mahogany
paneling and trim,
a winding staircase, leather accents. He couldn't imagine
living in
a place like this permanently. He'd take his place in the
Eastport section
of Annapolis any day, three bedrooms, two bathrooms, and a
nice little
yard where he could work up a sweat mowing and trimming.
He
sprinted up the enormous staircase that wound up and then
split halfway
to the right wing and the left wing, where the offices and
his suite
of rooms were. He spotted Olivia in the hallway and felt
that odd ping
in his chest he did whenever he saw her. Since they'd moved
to the estate,
and she now lived there, too, he saw her a lot more. Her
face, a perfect
oval framed by long, shiny dark hair, transformed into a
smile when
she saw him. She tamped it down, though, and he suspected
that had something
to do with Darkwell spotting them talking in the hallway
the other day.
The man had glowered.
Nicholas
paused a few feet from her. "I'm surprised to see you here
on a
Saturday." Their first weekend here she'd gone back to her
apartment.
She
gave him a soft smile. "I had things to do here."
"Can
we talk? Alone?"
Her
mouth moved without sound for a moment, conflict on her
face. "I,
uh…maybe it's not such a good idea."
"Is
that because of Darkwell? He say something to you?"
She
nodded, her mouth tightening. "He doesn't want us, uh,
socializing."
He
felt both gratification that the order seemed to bother her
and annoyance.
"This is about work."
"Oh."
Her face flushed in that sweet way that told him she had
been way too
sheltered as far as men were concerned. An intriguing
thought in itself.
"Of course."
He
wondered if she'd been sheltered by her parents. Maybe
she'd lived in
a remote house for the first several years of her life. He
knew the
feeling, and being stranded out in the boonies for his
first twelve
years had left him more comfortable being alone.
He
leaned in close, inhaling the faint scent of her rose
perfume. "I'd
love to socialize with you, but I don't want you to
get into
trouble. Where can we talk?"
Her
face flushed again, but she quickly turned. "Come this
way."
He
walked beside her, their hands accidentally brushing. He
stole a glance
at her as they passed a large, framed mirror in the
hallway. They passed
Jerryl Evrard's room, where he and Fonda were noisily going
at it, as
usual. Olivia's face flushed again as she studiously
avoided his gaze.
Oh, yeah, he'd love to socialize with her, to make her moan
and cry
out too, but he respected her adherence to the policy
prohibiting staff/contractor
relations.
Besides,
Olivia was too classy for a one or ten night stand
relationship, and
he wasn't into being tied down. He liked being alone, in
his home, or
in the middle of a forest tracking down bones, or a hundred
feet down
in the ocean looking for shipwrecks, without having to feel
obligated
to call the little woman and promise he was thinking about
her every
minute.
And
the fact that he was probably going to die sometime in the
near future
made getting involved with anyone even more wrong.
They
walked into the room at the end of the hallway where he and
Jerryl undertook
their missions and closed the door behind them. A look of
both trepidation
and anticipation crossed her face at that. The balcony had
been closed
in as a sunroom, but Darkwell had installed a heavy, dark
curtain to
block out all light. Olivia pulled it open, letting the sun
stream in
to burnish her straight hair with red highlights.
She
dressed nearly as conservatively as she did during the
week, wearing
black pants and a yellow, button-down shirt. It was
unbuttoned just
low enough, though, to show a hint of cleavage and the
creamy smooth
skin of her collarbone. She had incredible hazel-green
eyes, the kind
that made him forget he was there on business and not
pleasure. He walked
to the curved glass that overlooked the courtyard. Across
the way was
where Olivia stayed.
He
placed his hand against the warm glass. "Darkwell signed me
onto
DARK MATTER with the promise that I would be helping the
government
by locating hostages. So far all I've been doing is finding
this group
of what he calls Rogues, who are supposedly terrorists.
What do you
know about them?"
A
shadow crossed her face. "He hasn't told me much about
them, either.
I…I took care of Lucas Vanderwyck when he was here. He had
a fever
and I talked Peterson into putting him into a tub of water
to cool him
down. I remember thinking that he must have done something
pretty bad
to be there. But you saw what the Rogues did when they
broke in. They
shot our people. They're ruthless."
He
didn't even know he was going to reach out and touch the
side of her
temple where one of them had cold-cocked her two weeks ago.
The bruise
was gone, but there was a faint scar where she'd been cut.
Eric Aruda
was a bastard, no doubt about that. Her eyes widened at the
touch.
He
dropped his hand. "He could have killed you."
"I
know." Her voice quivered, and the shadow of the violence
still
haunted her eyes. "Look what he did to Carl."
"No,
I mean, he could have killed you. Easily. But he only
knocked you out.
They broke in to rescue their friends, not to attack. Carl
was holding
Eric's sister at gunpoint." Then he realized just what
she'd said.
"So there were prisoners."
Now
her face paled. "I wasn't supposed to tell anyone. Please
don't
say anything to Darkwell."
"I
overheard him talking about the prisoners right after it
happened. You
only confirmed it. He denied that there were prisoners at
the asylum.
I don't like being lied to."
"We
have to trust that he's doing the right thing. He has his
way, but he's
a good man."
Nicholas
narrowed his eyes. "You're not…involved with him, are you?"
He did seem a bit territorial about Olivia, and she seemed
both reverential
and obedient toward him.
A
half laugh-half bark erupted from her mouth, which she
covered. "No.
God, no. He's just…been my boss for a long time." She
tilted
her head. "Please don't let him know that I told you about
the
prisoners."
He
moved closer, his voice lowering. "Only if you tell me
what's really
going on here."
"I'm
strictly administrative. All I know is Darkwell brought in
three people
with special skills to break up terrorist cells. You
obviously have
some kind of skill." She paused, as though to let him add
what
that skill was. When he didn't say, she continued. "The
Rogues
are one of those cells. They're trying to sabotage the
program."
"Why?"
"I
don't know."
"Why
were they going to kill me?"
"Darkwell
has your best interest in mind. If he thinks they're a
danger to you,
I'd believe him."
She
definitely believed in the man. Maybe a little too much.
A
man's voice stopped them both. "If you want answers, ask
me."
They
both jerked around to find Darkwell standing in the
doorway.
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