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PRETTY DEAD GIRLS

Pretty Dead Girls, January 2018
by Monica Murphy

Entangled Teen
Featuring: Penelope Malone
336 pages
ISBN: 1633758915
EAN: 9781633758919
Kindle: B072QB3GVG
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"A fantastic, exciting, first-rate suspense for Young Adults of all ages!"

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PRETTY DEAD GIRLS
Monica Murphy

Reviewed by Monique Daoust
Posted January 3, 2018

Young Adult Suspense | Young Adult

Cape Bonita Prep is an exclusive school in a wealthy North California small town where the Larks reign supreme. The Larks is an organisation led by the students for volunteering and charity work. The Larks consists of ten girls -- five seniors, five juniors -- who are the brightest, the prettiest, the most popular; the elite of tomorrow. The Larks are also mean girls, and someone wants those mean girls dead. Penelope Malone, the Larks' president, is as shocked as everybody else when the principal gathers the student population in the gym to announce that one of their female jewels has been murdered. Some mean girls however, are meaner than others, and not everyone is equally traumatized, as there will be more PRETTY DEAD GIRLS...

Who knew that Monica Murphy could write a murder mystery of such quality! When my prime suspect was murdered, I was at a loss, and this is telling as I'm difficult to lead astray and hard to please when it comes to murder mysteries; until the very end, I really didn't know who was trustworthy. PRETTY DEAD GIRLS very fast-paced, and it is masterfully plotted, which rather surprised me since the book is billed as a YA novel and I did not expect such a tightly woven story. PRETTY DEAD GIRLS is actually a first-class romantic suspense whose protagonists are adolescents; that's the extent of the "Young Adult" angle, as I see it. Ms. Murphy captures the high school atmosphere, the cliques, and teenage behavior so accurately, that it felt eerily familiar to me, apart from the wealth and the murders. I appreciate that the author didn't have Penelope change dramatically along the way; Penelope might not be the meanest girl, but she's definitely not someone you want against you!

The romance between Penelope and her hunky physics classmate Cass Vincenti also felt genuine; given the context, his past, and that "Pen" is not Miss Congeniality, their relationship is filled with doubts, it is tempestuous, but also tender; it was just right. I'm not focusing so much on the romance, even though it is an essential part of the plot, because the suspense angle is just that terrific. I was a tad miffed though that one of the two heroic characters at the end was metaphorically shoved out of the way, but it is an infinitesimal detail with regards to the whole story.

I suppose I qualify as a mean girl myself because, in a way, I thought there was some poetic justice in there. I hope Monica Murphy continues in this vein, because there is a dearth of exceptional murder mysteries/romantic suspense authors, and I feel Ms. Murphy has the chops to reach the very top. PRETTY DEAD GIRLS is a fantastic book, and I wish the first of many in this genre from the author. Again, Brava, Monica Murphy!

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SUMMARY

Beautiful. Perfect. Dead.

In the peaceful seaside town of Cape Bonita, wicked secrets
and lies are hidden just beneath the surface. But all it
takes is one tragedy for them to be exposed.

The most popular girls in school are turning up dead, and
Penelope Malone is terrified she's next. All the victims so
far have been linked to Penelopeβ€”and to a boy from her
physics class. The one she's never really noticed before,
with the rumored dark past and a brooding stare that cuts
right through her.

There's something he isn't telling her. But there's
something she's not telling him, either.

Everyone has secrets, and theirs might get them killed.

EXCERPT

β€œThat car is still trailing us.”

Glancing in the side mirror, I see that the car is behind us.
Cass chooses that moment to take a curve extra fast, making the
tires squeal, and I gasp. β€œYou’re scaring me,” I murmur. It feels
like my heart just flew into my throat.

β€œJust wait. What I really want to do is going to scare you even
more,” he says cryptically.

β€œWhat do you want to do?”

β€œYou’ll have to trust me on this.”

β€œOkay.” I clamp my lips shut. I shouldn’t automatically agree,
right? I’m still having trust issues, even though I’d never say
that out loud. This entire day has been confusing. I don’t know
who to believe anymore.

β€œNo demanding we back out once we commit,” he says, his gaze
never wavering from the road. β€œThat’s a surefire way to get
ourselves hurt.”

His words are ominous. Like a warning. β€œFine. I’m all in.”

He eases up on the gas pedal, just the slightest bit. The car
slows, the vehicle behind us drawing closer. So close I swear it
looks like it’s going to eat the back bumper. β€œI don’t want you
to freak out.”

β€œOh my God, Cass.” Why is he slowing down? β€œJust tell me.”

β€œYou have to promise me one thing first.” His gaze meets mine,
lingering a moment too long. He should be watching the road, not
staring at me. β€œSay you’ll promise.”

β€œI promise,” I readily agree, frowning. β€œBut what am I
promising?”

He’s staring straight ahead once more, his fingers sliding over
the steering wheel, almost like a caress. β€œYou can’t scream.”

What?

β€œI mean it. No screaming. No yelling. You must remain quiet. I
need you to trust me, Pen.” He hesitates, his voice dropping
lower. β€œDo you trust me?”

Do I? He’s already asked me once and I said yes, but the doubt
still creeps in. He scares me a little. He alsoβ€”God, I am so
ridiculous thinking this, butβ€”he turns me on. He does. There’s
something about him. He has this edge that other boys don’t have.
And when he touches me, kisses me…

I’d probably do just about anything he asks me to.

So how can I doubt him when we’ve already gone this far together?

β€œI won’t scream,” I tell him quietly. β€œAnd I won’t yell. I
promise.”

β€œOkay.” He nods once, then hisses out a breath between his teeth.
I chance a glance at him, the way his dark hair falls over his
forehead, how he’s squinting his eyes. What he’s about to do,
what’s about to happen, feels…dangerous. β€œHere it goes.”

With a flick of his wrist he turns the car’s headlights off.
Like, completely off. The road goes dark. I suck in a breath,
hold it until I feel like it’s choking me. He hits the gas pedal
hard, the SUV roaring to life as he flies down the road. A
dangerous, winding road where multiple car crashes occur every
year. The windows are down, the wind blows through my hair,
blasts against my face, and I close my eyes.

I’m scared, and I can’t make a sound. Not a peep. I hold onto the
handle right above the window, gripping it with both hands as
Cass takes the twisty road with ease. My gaze is trained on the
side mirror and I watch for the car lights behind us.

They’re still there.

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