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COLLISION CONTROL

Collision Control, October 2014
Crossing Forces #4
by C.A. Szarek

Totally Bound Publishing
Featuring: Jared Manning; Melody Nash
316 pages
ISBN: 1784302163
EAN: 9781784302160
Kindle: B00O580O6I
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"Light Suspense And A Fiercely Loyal Hero In Touch With His Emotional Side And Knows What He Wants"

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COLLISION CONTROL
C.A. Szarek

Reviewed by Mahvish Saeed
Posted March 29, 2015

Mystery Police Procedural | Mystery | Romance Suspense

APD Detective Jared Manning loves being single and able to have one-night stands. That is till he meets a woman whose laugh intrigues him and who left him the next morning without so much as a goodbye note. He loves his job too because he is so good at it till he finds out the latest case has his estranged brother as the primary murder suspect. Can things get any more complicated?

School teacher, Melody Renee Nash has issues. Major issues with commitment. Thanks to the number her ex- fiancΓ© pulled on her, she has not been in any relationship since then. For her, the one-night stand was a massive mistake and most likely one of her friends asked Jared to come on to her. She cannot believe when a man like him can possibly be interested in someone like her.

Fate intervenes when Jared and Mel come face to face in her school. Never been serious with anyone, Jared is sure Mel is different. Convincing her to give him a chance though, is a task. She keeps running away. Then there is his missing brother and the need to lie to his partner about the relationship. On a cross roads with his duty as a cop and his duty as brother, what will he choose? With both his personal and professional life in a hurdle, Jared needs to find the correct balance or he just may end up losing everything.

Jared is a very well-developed character. I loved how Ms. Szarek showed the conflict he was facing and how she beautifully balanced his personal and professional life. At no point during reading COLLISION CONTROL did I feel that may be Jared's professional dilemma influenced his change from free-flying playboy to someone wanting to go steady. While I did not agree with his decisions regarding his brother and job, I completely empathized with him on why he did what he did. He is handsome, funny, smart, caring and incredibly loyal. Loved his interactions with everyone, his internal struggle and the emotional breakdown.

Mel on the other hand felt less focused upon. The book seemed to more or less revolve around Jared instead of both H/h. Mel is sweet and caring as long as she is not focusing on her hang-ups and insecurities. At times it felt forced. I would have liked to at point see an interaction between her and her ex who was constantly mentioned to be back but never shown. For me, their relationship needs further work upon where they actually discuss and get over their pasts. Nonetheless, theirs is a sweet passionate romance thanks to Jared who forced her out of her shell despite repeat rejections.

COLLISION CONTROL is written with multiple POVs which I admit added to the dimension of the story making it a very enjoyable read. The story is fast-paced and reads smoothly. The ending on the other hand felt very rushed and quickly wrapped up. Instead of reading the summary in the epilogue I would have liked some closure between Jared, his partner and brother to be shown. The final showdown and emotional outbursts showed how the characters are all humans not cold hard-asses or superheroes with no feelings. Felt sorry for Joe. He had it tough and so did Taylor. Looking forward to seeing their stories and if they finally catch the bad guy who got away. COLLISION CONTROL is an enjoyable read for all those who like light suspense, stubborn hero who is not afraid to show his emotions and some great secondary characters.

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SUMMARY

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A one night stand can't possibly mean forever…

Detective Jared Manning met his match at a bar. After a
night of passion, she sneaks out of his bed without so
much
as a note. Problem is, now he can’t find her.

Kindergarten teacher Melody Nash doesn’t do one night
stands. Embarrassment gets the best of her and she lies
about her name.

When they collide at her school, Mel resists his pull. She
won’t risk her heart on the obvious playboy, even though
she
can’t stop thinking about the night in his arms.

Stress engulfs both Jared’s personal and professional
life.
His brother is at the centre of the joint case he and his
partner are working in cooperation with FBI. He puts his
job
on the line when he fails to share his blood relationβ€”a
complication he doesn’t need, considering the FBI agent on
the case is convinced his brother killed her fiancΓ©.

Balance is the name of the game. Can Jared save his
brother
and convince Mel they’re meant to be together?

Reader advisory: This book contains references to past
sexual abuse and rape that happened when the character was
a
child.

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