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DANGEROUS DECEPTION

Dangerous Deception, November 2012
The Unbridled Series
by Cindy McDonald

Acorn Book Services
Featuring: Vic Deveaux
218 pages
ISBN: 0985726741
EAN: 9780985726744
Kindle: B00A01F1J0
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"Pennsylvania never looked so dark as in this tale of crime"

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DANGEROUS DECEPTION
Cindy McDonald

Reviewed by Clare O'Beara
Posted February 18, 2013

Suspense

The bloodstock business turns sour in this tale of kidnapping, drug deals, resentment and violence. Shane, the young boss of a Thoroughbred racing outfit fires a hand, Krebs, for slovenly and cruel work practices. Simultaneously old Vic, ex-jockey, is forced into retirement. The two jobless men conspire with another man to extort the cash from horse sales by means of kidnapping.

Pennsylvania never looked so dark as in DANGEROUS DECEPTION. I can't figure what drew Krebs to the world of horses at all, because he doesn't like them or the work, and acting up around young racehorses gets people killed. He's happy to commit a federal offence for a share of five hundred thousand dollars, and smirks as he uses a cattle prod on a chained victim. Having second thoughts, Vic gains help from another elderly hand but fails to do anything useful like calling the police. Thieves fall out and it is clear that Krebs never meant to return his captive Shane alive. Meanwhile Shane's father Mike is getting a search underway and the culprits and hideout seem obvious to him. He doesn't call the police either. A biker gang called the Nomads is on its way to rendezvous in the old mansion where Shane is being held, and they don't like outsiders.

This is closer to 'Reservoir Dogs' than to 'Secretariat', with a strange flavour from sentences such as: "Her full perfect breasts to remain exposed." Cindy McDonald has assembled a cast of odd characters, from unremittingly sour stable hands to a woman who thinks white wine should be uncorked and left to breathe. Perhaps the most unusual is Luzetta, the elderly daughter of a horror film director who camps out in her crumbling mansion, devoid of money but not of good intent. I did like the few insights into the horse training world but we could have done with more of them and less of brutality to suit a general readership. If you enjoy reading about dirty deeds and violent crime, DANGEROUS DECEPTION could be just the ticket.

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SUMMARY

Vic Deveaux’s glory days as a winning jockey have ended, but he refuses to accept that pile of horse hockey! When the West family asks Vic to take an easier position at their horse farm Westwood, he becomes enraged and teams up with two greedy stable hands in a scheme to kidnap the West’s younger son Shane. When Vic discovers that his new-found friends have murder on their minds, things turn ugly. Suddenly, Vic finds himself between the rock and the hard place. . He has betrayed his good friend, Eric West, but will he participate in his son’s murder as well? Not content to sit and wait for her men to bring her brother home, Kate West convinces homicide detective Carl Lugowski to check out a hunch at an old abandoned mansion. Soon, they’re trapped in a hornet’s nest of a notorious biker gang. Oh yeah, Vic’s deception has placed the West family in more danger than they know what to do with!

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