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Dangerous Designs

Dangerous Designs, August 2011
Design #1
by Dale Mayer

Valley Publishing
216 pages
ISBN: 098774111X
EAN: 9780987741110
Kindle: B0058ZY6Y8
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"Be careful what you doodle - it may come true"

Fresh Fiction Review

Dangerous Designs
Dale Mayer

Reviewed by Clare O'Beara
Posted December 31, 2012

Young Adult Paranormal

Storey Dalton, aged sixteen, is a girl with an attitude - but when she picks up a strange pencil she doesn't realise how dangerous her obsessive doodling will become.

The town of Bankhead is dying as the mine shuts down and people move, and Storey feels bored and rebellious, though her charmingly Wiccan mother isn't exactly mainstream. As Storey sketches she finds herself drawing obsessive pictures of a doorway, and these DANGEROUS DESIGNS lead to her crossing to another dimension. The only one who knows what is happening to her is new kid Eric, who understands that the pencil is a bespelled stylus and has been sent to recover it. Yet Eric can't panic the girl so he lets her out of the abandoned mine she's trapped in, gets to know her and asks to see her drawings.

Odd long fingers are now making their way past the door - and Storey is sure she didn't draw them. Eric finally explains that creatures called Louers are trying to break through from another dimension and takes Storey to an interview with Paxton, a scientist in his own dimension. The girl doesn't like being talked around as if she was an object, and refuses to give back the stylus - she gives the assembling scientists attitude instead and drops out of a drawn doorway. Eric is sent to take her back as she knows too much, but Storey then finds his world's living spaces sparse and utilitarian, while she hears different sides of the argument about the Louers, which are now attacking his people. Bolting home she discovers that changes have occurred... her absent father is present and her mother is a staunch Catholic. How can she undo any damage she's caused, or is this the result of the Louers breaking through to her world instead?

Dale Meyer has written an interesting tale for young adults, which doesn't force adult behaviour on the protagonists. By the end we understand that slavery makes enemies and more advanced science doesn't make everyone using it right. Storey is a tool of the stylus to begin with but ends up making her own choices and being true to herself. Girls and boys will enjoy this tale which may encourage them to reflect on our modern technology.

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SUMMARY

Drawing is her world...but when her new pencil comes alive, it's his world too.

Her...Storey Dalton is seventeen and now boyfriendless after being dumped via Facebook. Drawing is her escape. It's like as soon as she gets down one image, a dozen more are pressing in on her. Then she realizes her pictures are almost drawing themselves...or is it that her new pencil is alive?

Him...Eric Jordan is a new Ranger and the only son of the Councilman to his world. He's crossed the veil between dimensions to retrieve a lost stylus. But Storey is already experimenting with her new pencil and what her drawings can do – like open portals.

It ... The stylus is a soul–bound intelligence from Eric's dimension on Earth and uses Storey's unsuspecting mind to seek its way home, giving her an unbelievable power. She unwittingly opens a third dimension, one that held a dangerous predatory species banished from Eric's world centuries ago, releasing these animals into both dimensions.

Them... Once in Eric's homeland, Storey is blamed for the calamity sentenced to death. When she escapes, Eric is ordered to bring her back or face that same death penalty. With nothing to lose, can they work together across dimensions to save both their worlds?


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