"Trading Love for the Judas Coins"
Reviewed by Diana Troldahl
Posted May 31, 2010
Romance Paranormal
Second in the Soul Gatherer Series, McCleave continues in
the world she built, focusing on a rare female soul
gatherer, Lena Sharpe, and her relationship with Brian Webster,
introduced in book one of the series Drawn into
Darkness. If Satan and his minions succeed in collecting tainted
relics, they gain control over more and more of the middle
plane (Earth) and the people who dwell there. The more
items they hold, the stronger and deeper their power
becomes, the more demons can travel through the rifts, the
closer the middle plane comes to damnation. Working their way toward heaven by gathering souls of the
newly dead, soul gatherers have no hope for a normal human
life, only the goal of repentance and the hope of
redemption. Why then do long-forgotten needs catch fire when
Brian and Lena meet? He feels in his gut that she's a bad
risk, but he can't seem to keep from trusting her, even when
her true goal is revealed. Soul Gather Brian Webster wears his urbane polished persona
as a shield concealing his feelings of failure. Yet another
young girl dies before he can save her, Judas coin clenched
in her hand. He was too late to save the priest, too late to
save the innocent, almost too late to save the coin.
How can Lena Sharpe keep her fellow soul-gatherers from
learning her true goal? Like them, she seeks the coins, not
to keep them from Satan's grasp, but to hand them over. She
needs the coins to ransom Heather from the clutches of demon
possession. She has already lost several of those dear to
her by refusing to give up the coins and it has broken her
spirit. Now nothing else matters but preserving the life of
a young girl, not even the destruction of the world BOUND BY DARKNESS is a little darker in tone than book one
of the series, although perhaps that is due to the focal
characters rather than plot. I don't recommend reading these
out of order, more enjoyment will be gained by learning
about the world and it's people in the first book.
SUMMARY
Death's warriors guard against demon soul thieves for one
chance at redemption...Desire be damned.
Bound
together by burning desire and a similar darkness in their
hearts, Soul Gatherers Brian Webster and Lena Sharpe race
against time to take back from a demon ancient coins that
could destroy civilization. But as the truth behind a deadly
bargain Lena made surfaces, Brian is faced with a desperate
choice-save the one, or save the many.
ExcerptNo one expects Saks Fifth Avenue
to blow up under their feet.
Yet, as Brian Webster weighed
the pros of a blue-on-blue-striped Gucci versus a classic
white Zegna
dress shirt, the famous store did exactly that. With
absolutely no warning,
a low boom rose up through the carpeted floor, vibrating
his shoes and
rattling the windows. Before he could leap, the chilling
shriek of bending
metal accompanied a four-inch drop in the floor.
Only his Soul Gatherer reflexes
kept him upright.
Instantly, panicked screams,
warbling alarms, and heavy crashes of crumbling
infrastructure replaced
the moneyed hush of the posh emporium. An etched-glass
chandelier crashed
to the ground, strafing two fallen customers with shattered
remnants.
Several brass-and-wood displays toppled, knocking a suit-
clad salesman
to the ground.
A thin tendril of smoke and
the smell of burned matches curled up from gaping hole in
the floor,
but it was the oily aftertaste of charcoal that connected
all the dots.
Pulse surging, Brian tossed the shirts onto a mahogany
table now littered
with glass and raced for the elevators. That blend of odors
was all
too familiar.
Brimstone.
Somewhere below him, a demon
had popped in from hell.
At the elevator lobby, the
scene was a mess. The marble flooring had shifted like
tectonic plates.
Dust and fragmented glass coated every surface. People
hugged the walls,
dazed or crying, a few of them praying. Brian paused. The
creature wreaking
havoc on the floors below needed to be stopped—no doubt
about that.
But one of the elevator cars, jarred by the explosion, had
slid several
feet with the doors still open. Three women and a toddler
screamed for
help from its depths, terrified they would plummet to the
ground floor.
And there was no way to be
sure they wouldn’t.
A very large man in a yellow
golf shirt bravely lay on his stomach, reaching his plump
arm into the
gap between the floor and the top of the car. Choosing
lives he could
see over those he could not, Brian dove to the uneven floor
beside him.
“Come on, ladies,” he coaxed
urgently. “Let’s get you out of there.”
Even as he spoke, another explosion
shuddered through the building, heaving the floor beneath
their bellies
and bringing ceiling tiles down on their heads. The
elevator gave up
a deep metallic sigh and scraped a few inches lower, sparks
flying.
The women’s screams rose another octave, and the man beside
him jerked.
To give the guy credit, though, he didn’t pull away.
Two of the trapped women, spurred
by the realization that they were about to die, latched
onto their arms.
Brian easily tugged his elderly victim clear of the car,
then helped
his co-rescuer free the other. Only the woman with the
child remained
inside. Between the terror wringing their faces and the
constant stream
of tears, he doubted they could see straight.
“Give him the baby,” Brian
told the frantic woman, holding her watery gaze. “You take
my
hand.”
She responded well to his firm
voice. Crossing the car with hesitant steps, she handed off
her young
son. Once the boy was safe, however, everything seemed to
overwhelm
her. Shock took hold. Her arms and legs trembled violently
and her breathing
became labored. She grabbed at his hand several times, but
fell back
into the car.
The elevator car shuddered
with every attempt.
Brian hooked a foot around
a heavy potted palm. Leaning in farther, he wrapped an arm
around the
frightened woman’s waist. Her shirt was damp with cold
sweat, and
the shudders racking her body echoed through his own. As
another grind
of metal presaged disaster, he clenched his stomach
muscles, pulled
up sharply, and hauled her out. Trading her tearful words
of gratitude
for a quick hug, he gently guided the woman toward her son,
who clutched
his savior’s shirt with balled fists.
“Head for the opposite side
of the building,” he advised his fellow rescuer. “Get
everyone out,
quick as you can.”
Taking a deep breath to prepare
for what lay ahead, he ran for the red EXIT light.
In the dim stairwell, he pulled
his sword out from under his suit jacket. Freed of its
mystical scabbard,
the fifteenth-century Oakeshott replica became visible, but
witnesses
were the least of his worries. A solitary explosion would
have meant
he was dealing with a havoc demon. But a havoc demon only
broke through
the barrier into this realm to cause random accidents, and
it had only
moments to execute its sorry-assed deed before it snuffed
out like a
spark of hellfire. It didn’t have the juice to hit a joint
twice.
This was something else.
He murmured a quick shield
spell and then slowly descended to the fifth-floor landing.
His feet
crunched on the debris littering the stairs—chunks of
concrete, crumbled
mortar, a fallen sign, and a thick layer of gray dust.
Every step echoed
eerily against the walls and eliminated all hope of a
stealthy approach.
Not that silence mattered to the victim sprawled on the
landing. He
was beyond help.
Brian scanned the man’s lifeless
figure, taking in the scorched black suit and the rose
quartz rosary
entwined in his burned fingers. A cold sense of dread
settled in his
belly. He knew without turning the body over who it was.
Father O’Shaunessy.
The man he’d arranged to meet here in the store in less
than an hour.
This was no random demon attack.
His gaze traveled outward,
over the numerous scuffle marks in the dust to the gray-
painted cinder-block
walls, where a series of large scorches marked the pitted
concrete.
A brutal battle had been waged here with bolts of
supernatural energy
pitched by both sides, every returned blast a valiant
attempt by the
priest to defend himself and . . .
Brian frowned. Not all the
dark stains were soot. There was blood, too. A lot of
it.
Yet O’Shaunessy’s body
showed no sign of an open injury, only the searing wounds
consistent
with fending off firebombs. Had someone else been here? Was
someone
left alive?
Brian quickly put a hand to
the priest’s throat. Soothing warmth flowed into his
fingertips, fluttered
up his arm, and wrapped around his heart—the telltale
transition of
a soul destined for heaven.
Another explosion hit the building.
The walls of the stairwell vibrated, and mortar dust and a
piece of
concrete the size of bread loaf dislodged from somewhere
above, smashing
to the ground a half inch from his toes. Screams floated up
from the
floors below and curled in his gut. Whether or not the
priest had been
alone was irrelevant. Whatever was down there needed to be
destroyed.
Leaping over the metal handrail,
he dropped four floors in blur. He landed at the bottom in
an easy crouch,
then sprang to his feet.
Sword in hand, he strode through
the smoke and into the shattered ruin that had once been
Ladies Cosmetics.
His stomach knotted. The first floor tended to be one of
the busiest
spots in the store, filled with gawking tourists and trend-
worshiping
teens. Tonight was no exception. At least two dozen bodies
lay strewn
about like crumpled garbage, dampened by a barely
functioning sprinkler
system. Men, women, and . . . at least one child. Several
alive, some not.
Brian tore his gaze away from
the human devastation, searching the hazy interior for the
demon. Dealing
with the painful toll would have to wait. Right now,
stopping the carnage
took priority.
A thin wail of sirens rose
and fell in the distance, growing steadily closer.
Reassuring, but not
his focus. Filtering out emergency vehicles, electric
crackles, and
low moans of the injured, he homed in on the sounds that
haunted a Soul
Gatherer’s nightmares: the raspy murmur of hellish
incantations and
the whoosh of firebombs in the air.
And he found the bastard.
Left. About a hundred yards
through the haze.
Most of Satan’s henchies
wore a glamour to disguise their presence among humans. But
not this
one. It was a mottled red-and-gray colossus, twice Brian’s
height
and probably three times his weight, horns and talons
everywhere. A
long, ooze-dripping tail whipped back and forth, writhing
with a life
of its own. As demons went, it was easily the most imposing
creature
Brian had ever run across. But he dared not think about
that.
Giving the flexible appendage
a wide berth, he advanced through the rubble, visualizing
his attack.
The monstrosity conveniently had its back to him, so he
leapt atop the
remnants of a display counter and dove at the hulking
figure from behind.
His target was the heavily muscled neck. The Oakeshott was
a very fast
blade and the element of surprise would work in his
favor.
Unfortunately, the remaining
glass in the display chose that moment to fall to the
floor, smashing
on the tiles with a wince-worthy crescendo.
The demon pivoted just as the
arc of Brian’s swing gained full momentum. Red eyes
glaring, it raised
a platter-sized palm, muttered a single word, and blasted
Brian in the
chest with a fat glob of red-hot lava. The missile sent him
flying,
and he landed on a display case in a splash of splintered
wood and shattered
glass. Worse, the lava bomb ate right through his shield,
gnawed through
his Jay Kos jacket, and drilled deep into muscle. Breathing
became a
serious chore.
What was this thing?
He surged to his feet, conjured
a fresh shield, and brandished his sword, prepared to fend
off another
fireball. But nothing came at him. The behemoth demon had
turned away,
wading through the rubble toward the Fiftieth Street doors.
It wasn’t
interested in him, couldn’t care less about the angry Soul
Gatherer
determined to send its ass back to hell.
And that made Brian’s heart
skip a beat. What demon could resist an opportunity to
steal a soul
now that it was collected and available for the taking?
Especially when
the odds appeared to be in its favor? If it wasn’t
interested in snatching
the priest’s soul, what was it interested in?
He peered through the smoke,
past the demon’s massive frame, and frowned. The
surprisingly intact
door to the outside world was swinging shut. Someone had
just left the
building. Judging by the smear of bright red blood on the
glass, an
injured someone. Perhaps the someone from the
stairwell.
Not pausing to sort out the
whys, Brian put on a burst of speed. He dashed around the
demon, narrowly
dodged a vicious stab of its tail, and pushed through the
door into
the late May evening. The sun was setting, leaving thin
ribbons of tawny
light falling between buildings. The traffic on the busy
street had
slowed to a crawl—heads popped out of car windows; wide
eyes locked
on the wafting smoke several floors above.
Brian scanned the gawking bystanders,
looking for his wounded escapee.
There. Across the street,
a bloodstained T-shirt on a figure limping up the stairs of
St. Pat’s
Cathedral.
The door at his back exploded
in a thick moil of fire and greasy black smoke, pitching
Brian and a
million shards of glass and metal halfway across the
street. He rolled
over the hood of a Yellow Cab, bounced to his feet, and
raced for the
church entrance. New screams rose into the air and then
were abruptly
silenced as the demon swept aside a parked car and seared
everything
within a fifty-foot radius with a mouthful of furnace-hot
heat. Brian
shoved the ugly thought of fried bodies to the back of his
mind and
kept running. The demon never varied its pace, but every
step gained
it fifteen feet. It wouldn’t be far behind him.
Brian’s eyes adjusted instantly
to the dim interior of the church.
The last afternoon Mass was
over, but a few map-carrying tourists lingered in the pews
and in the
gift shop. Spotting his fugitive was easy. A bone-thin
blond girl, no
more than twenty, dragged a stiff leg up the nave toward
the altar,
one arm hanging by her side, the other clutched to her
chest. It was
a testament to the awe-inspiring beauty of the cathedral’s
arches
that no one noticed the blood trail she left behind on the
marble floor.
Brian leapt over two rows of
pews and sprinted.
He reached his target just
as the demon hit the church with a masonry-crushing blast.
The girl
was on the verge of collapse. Deep cuts laced her arms and
neck. The
front of her threadbare Old Navy T-shirt was soaked with
blood, and
her lips were chalky white.
Each passing minute was killing
her.
Behind him, the heavy bronze
doors exploded inward, sailing twenty feet before landing
on pews that
buckled under the weight. The tourists ran blindly for the
main entrance,
far less interested in what had caused the explosion than
in escaping
the mayhem. Not bothering with introductions, Brian scooped
the girl
up in one arm and dashed for the Forty-ninth Street
door.
She didn’t make things easy.
Despite her weakened state, the girl flailed.
“No,” she said as she pummeled
him with her fist. “I can’t leave.”
“Honey, if we don’t leave,
we’re going to die,” he told her grimly, his fingers
struggling
to keep their hold on her blood-slicked skin.
“Let me go.”
A fireball hit him in the lower
back—a teeth-rattling jolt of energy that disintegrated his
new shield
as easily as the last. He stumbled, but kept running.
Conjuring up another
shield, he leapt left, over a pew and behind a fluted
column. Just in
time. The wrought-iron chandelier above his last position
crashed to
the floor, sending a spray of fine glass and chipped tile
in all directions.
But the dive allowed the girl
to slip free of his hold. She slithered under the nearest
bench and
peered out at him from her dim hideout. Her face was ashen,
her eyes
dark and wide. And it stirred memories. Memories of another
time and
another desperate girl. Brian shook his head. Now was not
the time.
“This is a church,” she
whispered. “This is sanctuary. It can’t hurt me here.”
He stared at her. Damn.
She believed that shit. She had no idea that hallowed
ground did little
more than inflict a slow burn on a demon’s flesh.
The column protecting them
took an indirect hit, cracked, and partially crumbled.
There wasn’t
enough time to explain how things really worked, so he
reached for her
again.
She flinched away.
“Sweetheart, please,”
he begged. The marble floor trembled under the advancing
steps of the
demon. “This whole place is about to fall around our
ears.”
But she withdrew into the shadows
and shook her head, refusing to be swayed.
Which left him with only one
option: his original choice—fight.
He closed his eyes, finding
and focusing on the throb of power that lay deep in his
chest. Drawing
hard on the cool white energy, he shoved off the floor. His
muscular
legs flexed with practiced ease and he flipped over ten
pews, landing
in the nave with his sword ready for action. The demon
again ignored
him, maintaining its relentless pursuit of the girl.
Perfect.
Brian ducked under the creature’s
long, whipping tail and went for its Achilles’ tendons.
Were they still called that
if the creature had cloven hooves?
The mystical enhancements on
his blade cut through the demon’s shield, and he sliced
deep. Unfortunately,
the demon’s thick, scaly hide served its purpose and his
swing fell
short of success, unable to sever the tendons
completely.
The demon issued an angry roar
that blew out every stained-glass window in the cathedral.
It spun around,
splintering a dozen pews into matchsticks with its tail,
and released
a gust of thousand-degree breath in Brian’s direction.
Benches all
around him licked into a fiery blaze, then disintegrated
into ash. But
Brian’s shield survived the attack, and so did he. Dripping
with sweat
but still vigorously alive, he rushed the demon again,
leaping high
and scoring two slices—one across the beast’s massive chest
and
the other across its biceps.
Before he could regroup and
deal another blow, however, the demon’s tail slipped around
his waist.
With anaconda strength, it flicked him aside, tossing him a
hundred
feet with incredible ease. Brian smacked into a wall, the
air in his
lungs expelling in a sharp huff. He slid to the floor,
dazed, an easy
target for the huge chunk of masonry the demon tore from a
wall and
flung atop him. His shield repelled the worst of the blow,
but Brian’s
sternum took the rest, cracking and bruising. He heaved to
his feet,
sucking in a pinched breath.
Shunting his misery aside,
burying his pain beneath a layer of fierce resolve, he sped
back toward
the demon. He zigzagged around several pillars to present a
more erratic
target, but the demon managed to lock onto him in spite of
his defensive
maneuvers. Molten lava hit him at the hip, tore through his
shield as
if it were made of tissue paper, and burrowed into his
skin. Brian staggered.
A dozen hot, hungry worms chewed
through his flesh, right to the bone. Every nerve ending
howled. Black
spots crowded his vision—a vain attempt by his mind to shut
out the
pain. Nausea clawed at his belly, and his arms and legs
turned to rubber.
He might well have fallen to his knees were it not for the
feeble words
that filtered through his agony-induced haze.
“Hail Mary . . . full of grace . . .”
The girl was praying, using
her last breaths to beg forgiveness for her sins.
Damn it. No.
He couldn’t let her die here, not like this. There hadn’t
been a
mark on her cheek, no sign that she was destined to die
today. And she
was just a kid, barely a woman. She was a lot like—too much
like—Melanie.
He’d screwed up with his sister, but this girl he could
help. All
he had to do was keep his shit together.
Brian reached deeper, found
a last reserve of strength, and forced his legs to move.
This fucking
demon had to go down. Now.
He pumped his legs again and
again, each step firmer than the last, each step taking him
closer to
his quarry. Another fireball hit him, but he kept going,
the pain an
ever-tightening cinch around his chest and yet, somehow,
hollow and
distant. As if it tore through the guts of someone else.
Adjusting his
hold on the leather-wrapped hilt of his sword, he
envisioned his attack,
right through to a successful conclusion.
Then he leapt.
Using the creature’s flexed
knee for leverage, he launched himself upward, ducking
around its massive
arm, swinging at the bulging cords of its neck. His
Oakeshott-style
blade, forged by a very talented mage, had gained new
energy from the
drips of demon gore sliding down its length. It hummed with
supernatural
strength, and the glowing blue edge broke through the
demon’s shield
with reassuring ease. Out of the corner of his eye, Brian
saw the angry,
undulating tail lash in his direction, but his attention
remained locked
on his target—the base of the neck, where a fat jugular
vein pulsed
with undead life.
The cutting edge of the sword
bit deep into the demon’s flesh, carving through hide and
sinew and
nerves alike. Thick, crimson blood sprayed everywhere.
Success. Sort
of. The demon’s tail whipped around his torso, circling. It
slithered
all the way up to his shoulder and then . . . squeezed.
Ribs, collarbone,
shoulder blade—a dozen bones snapped under the relentless
choking,
the sound a sickening series of crunches. Only when a death-
throes shudder
racked the demon from head to toe did the pressure ease.
Thrashing wildly,
the tail flung Brian into the air.
The demon lurched, fell to
its knees, and collapsed face-first in the rubble.
Brian only vaguely noted the
fall. Agony had him firmly it its grip. He’d ended his
flight thirty
pews to the left, atop his mangled shoulder. His immortal
body, aware
that the battle was over, was threatening to shut down for
repair, but
he fought the siren call of blackout. The job wasn’t done.
He had
to reach the girl.
Bile in his mouth, vision distorted
by a red film, he pushed brokenly to his feet.
Every part of his pulverized
body howled. His blood pounded in protest, filling his ears
with an
angry rush. Forcing the pain to recede, he dragged himself
across the
floor, where he found her still huddled beneath a pew near
the doors.
Pale and bloodless. Her eyes were closed, her prayers
silenced. He knew
long before he grasped her slender hand that she was dead;
he just didn’t
want to believe.
Gently, he tugged her out of
her cave and into his arms. The movement jarred his ravaged
shoulder,
sending an agonizing stab in the direction of his lungs,
but the pain
felt right and just. He let his chin sink to his chest.
He’d failed
her.
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