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Running from her past, she finds a killer, a protector, and her faith.

Excerpt of Trouble the Water by Jacqueline Friedland

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SparkPress
May 2018
On Sale: May 8, 2018
Featuring: Abigail Milton
352 pages
ISBN: 1943006547
EAN: 9781943006540
Kindle: B074W13QLJ
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Excerpt of Trouble the Water by Jacqueline Friedland

Douglas urged his horse onward at a feverish pace, gripped
by panic that his wife might have been taken, or his
daughter. The evening’s vacant streets worked in his favor
as the animal tore across the cobblestones, racing
furiously toward his estate. The horse huffed and spat,
sweating into the moonlight, as Douglas struggled to focus
on speed, rather than on his dread. Rounding the corner
onto Lightbourne Street, where candlelight emanated from
the windows of quiet houses, he had the sudden thought that
it couldn’t be today. Whatever that dis- tasteful man,
Wilson Bly, meant by the threat, Douglas told him- self, it
wouldn’t be this very same day when he had only just been
alerted to the possibility of danger. He began to relax
slightly, feeling added relief now that he was so close to
home. He eased up on the horse, slowing to a trot and
patting the animal’s hide in recognition of its exertion.

He and the horse continued east at a lighter pace, and
Douglas inhaled deeply, trying to calm his racing heart. As
the humid air filled his lungs, he caught the scent of
smoke, sudden and sour. His alarm returned afresh, beastly
in its force. Digging his heels into the horse’s sides, he
urged the animal to resume its breakneck pace. They
barreled across the remainder of Lightbourne, and Douglas
began to detect the din of disaster, shouts, and clamor
from afar. As the horse cut onto Meeting Street, Douglas
was greeted by a vision that would terrorize him the rest
of his days.

The Elling estate was alight against the dark night in
roaring, spitting flames. Fire was bursting forth from the
east side of the house, licking its way up the walls,
reaching its hands sky- ward, like crackling, roaring calls
of prayer. There were people running every which way,
bodies emerging and disappearing behind the fog of smoke in
a frenzied crush as they tried to help manage the fire.

Douglas searched the crowd for his family as he rode on-
ward, forcing the horse toward the fire. β€œSarah! Cherish!
They could still be inside!” He shouted into the air of the
maddened crowd around him. At the perimeter of the property
he jumped from his horse, still screaming as he rushed
toward the flames. β€œSarah! Cherish!”

β€œNo, Mr. Elling!” The family butler ran out from the
masses, from the darkness, and grabbed Douglas’s coattails,
trying to hold him where they stood at the edge of the
drive.

β€œJasper! Oh, thank God! Where are my girls?” Douglas
shouted over the popping and crackling of the fire.

β€œPlease, Mr. Elling, there is nothing we can do now. Come
with me, to safety.” Jasper pulled Douglas’s arm, trying to
move him back toward the street, toward the faceless crowd
of on- lookers.

β€œNo, take me to Sarah!” Douglas shouted again. β€œWhere
are they?” His voice was eclipsed by the sound of roof
crumbling into the house below it.

β€œMr. Elling, I am so sorry!” Jasper leaned close and
shouted into Douglas’s ear to be heard over the commotion.

β€œThe market! I was out at the market!” He shouted that
again, as if his prior whereabouts were the main focus.

β€œI am so sorry, sir!” Jasper was repeating himself, his
bursting words nearly meaningless to Douglas. Though if
the man was shouting, Douglas reasoned, Sarah and Cherish
must be safe. People didn’t shout at times of death.
There was no com- fort in shouted words.

β€œWhere are they?” Douglas pressed, his eyes searching the
darkness.

Excerpt from Trouble the Water by Jacqueline Friedland
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