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THE RETURN OF THE WHALEFLEET

The Return Of The Whalefleet, April 2022
Darkstar 2
by Benedict Patrick

Author Self-Published
Featuring: Brightest; First Officer Min; Abelandu
270 pages
ISBN: 8794586169
EAN: 9798794586169
Kindle: B09V5QH4HT
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"More danger faces the crew of the Melodious Narwhal"

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THE RETURN OF THE WHALEFLEET
Benedict Patrick

Reviewed by Clare O'Beara
Posted May 5, 2022

Fantasy | Fantasy Dark

To enjoy this fantasy of a ship sailing strange purple-black seas, I believe you need to have read the first in the Darkstar series. Min is First Officer of an expedition’s ship, called Melodious Narwhal, which earlier fell through a rift between dimensions and ended up in great peril. THE RETURN OF THE WHALEFLEET picks up some time after the close of THE FLIGHT OF THE DARKSTAR DRAGON. Β 

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A major factor in the first book was the Darkstar DragonΒ itself. While the monstrous creature is still a threat, the crew have learned to live with it and now concentrate on rift-hopping for essential supplies, as they wait for a suitable portal from the Darkstar to their home of New Windward. Other travelers include a stately parade across the sky of beings using giant whales as galleons. Whoever they are, they don’t stoop to notice the ragged castaways. Then Min somewhat rashly (but isn’t every action rash in this world) comes to the rescue of one of the travelers and draws the attention of mightier forces. Β 

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Abelandu, the wizardly scholar we all love to despise, is no less whining, arrogant, and insufferable. At one point I thought he had begun to learn his lesson, but I am not sure it will last. His notes introduce the story with a recap for newcomers, and he is such an unsympathetic character that I think a few lines only would have been advisable. Other familiar faces include Brightest, a longtime resident of the region, and Jedda, a skyship artificer. Then there is Zoya, also titled Colonel Zoya Odili, who knows she is doomed because of a choice she made for magical power – she just doesn’t know how long she has remaining. At this point the tale becomes darker (as opposed to just dangerous) and nothing seems to go right. Another constant is the dedication of players to improving their game of Eshak; fortunately, we are spared the rules of this game.

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I had a good time revisiting this series, which again has the eye-catching cover art created by Jenny Zemanek. Benedict Patrick previously penned the Yarnsworld series, and I hope he will return to that series when the ripples settle from THE RETURN OF THE WHALEFLEET. A third book at least is promised for the Darkstar stories. That will be fun.

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SUMMARY

Is the price for survival worth paying?

Through quick thinking, calm resolve, and just sheer guts, First Officer Choi Minjung has helped her crew survive their first months lost within the improbable Darkstar Dimension, avoiding disasters in the form of parasitic magical items, amorphous oozes that pursue their ship over the waves, and hungry horizon-spanning dragons.

However, Min’s crew are not the only beings stranded in the Darkstar Dimension.

When the peaceful Whalefleet – a race of dimensional travellers who sail across the night sky on the backs of massive, luminous creatures – are attacked, Min and her crew race to their aid, but in doing so draw the attention of a faceless, ancient foe that may hold the secrets to this land.

Min faces a choice: stand down and keep her people safe while the innocent Whalefleet suffers, or confront an impossible foe, risking all she has sworn to protect.

The Return of the Whalefleet is the second novel in the Darkstar series, an action-packed fantasy adventure set in a wonderfully strange and dangerous world.

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