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OFFSETTING PENALTIES

Offsetting Penalties, November 2017
Brinson Renegades #1
by Ally Mathews

Entangled Crush
Featuring: Garret Mitchell; Isabelle Oster
202 pages
ISBN: 1640633383
EAN: 9781640633384
Kindle: B076H7WZYW
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OFFSETTING PENALTIES
Ally Mathews

Reviewed by Patti Loveday
Posted April 5, 2018

Young Adult

OFFSETTING PENALTIES by Ally Mathews is set in a Texas high school where football reigns supreme. This young adult contemporary romance story about a ballet dancer and a football player will not disappoint. This is a story that follows smoothly from high school football, ballet, and both sides of the tracks seamlessly without leaving out any of the juicy details.

Senior year creates a buzz of activity for Garret who is the captain of the football team. That buzz ranges from applying for scholarships, playing football, and hoping to play college football. He also manages to find time to work at his father's yard. Isabelle or Izzy as she is called by her friends, is the rich daughter of a politician. She lives with her father, two dogs, and a housekeeper in one of the largest homes in town. Izzy's mom died when she was younger making her even more determine to go to college so that she can dance in a ballet company. What happens when her audition does not go has planned?

Garret and Izzy went to the same school their whole lives. They each hang out with a different group of friends. Somehow, they do not know much about each other except that he blames her for his best friend losing his scholarship to an art school when they were in middle school. When their paths cross because the football coach thinks ballet will help Garret's flexibility they make a deal to help each other. What they do not plan is getting closer and learning that they have more in common than they once thought. Will this new-found friendship turn to romance or will being from different backgrounds have an impact on the outcome?

Matthews has written a novel that is spot on when it comes to Texas high school football. She has meshed together two different group of high school teens making them see each other for who they are and not where they are from. OFFSETTING PENALTIES is a book that focuses on real problems that most teens face making this a realistic life like read. The perfect novel for anyone who loves young adult romance and football.

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SUMMARY

Isabelle Oster has dreamed of being a prima ballerina her entire life, so whenthe only male dancer backs out of the fall production, she’s devastated. Without a partner, she has no hope of earning a spot with the prestigious Ballet Americana company. Until hot jock Garret practicing stretches in one of the studios gives Izzy an idea, and she whips out her phone. But does she really want this badly enough to resort to blackmail? All-state tight end Garret Mitchell will do anything to get a college football scholarship. Even taking ballet, which surprisingly isn’t so bad, because it means he gets to be up close and personal with the gorgeous Goth girl Izzy while learning moves to increase his flexibility. But Izzy needs him to perform with her for the Ballet Americana spot, and he draws the line at getting on stage. Especially wearing tights.

EXCERPT

Isabelle plowed through the mess and snatched a cloth tape measure off a table, then went to the desk and picked up a pencil and a pad of paper. β€œOkay, I’ll warn you now. This is going to be awkward. I’ll try not to manhandle you, but this is gonna feel a lot like an airport pat down, so be prepared.” β€œI’ve never been on an airplane.” Her eyes widened, but she didn’t comment. β€œWell, just be prepared.” She poked him between his shoulder blades. β€œI need you to stand straight. You’re taller than most dancers, so we need to be accurate about the length… Of…the costume pieces…” He stifled another laugh. The girl really needed to think before she spoke. It was almost like she was nervous, but there was nothing for her to be anxious about. She put her hand on his left shoulder and held the tape while stretching it over to his other side. Her fingers were warm against him. A shiver slid up his neck. He wasn’t used to being touched. Knocked down and stepped on, yes. But skin to skin contact, no. Something scratched his neck. β€œOuch.” β€œSorry. I needed a solid surface to write the measurement. This is quicker than going to the desk.” β€œIt’s nice to be useful.” Next, she measured from his shoulder to his waist, and again pressed the pad of paper against his back. β€œPut your arms out straight, please.” The tape tickled, but he held still, afraid of the consequences if he fidgeted.Once that was done, she moved in front of him to measure his neck. Though she was tall for a girl, the top of her head barely reached his chin. Her fingers skimmed across his neck and his stomach tightened. Hopefully she was almost done. His was not a touchy-feely sort of family, so the only kind of contact he usually had with other people was either during school dances or on the football field, and neither of those had ever made him crave more. β€œAll right, here comes the awkward part.” β€œThat wasn’t it?” He closed his eyes and held his breath. β€œI’m afraid not.” She knelt next to him and measured from the top of his hip to his shoe. That wasn’t so bad. Beads of sweat had formed on her forehead. β€œUm, I need to measure the inseam now.” He shook his head. Do not pass go, do not collect two hundred dollars. She was not going anywhere near…there. β€œLet me hold the top of the tape measure.” Without waiting for her response, he took it out of her hand and held it against the inside of his thigh and dropped the rest so she could pick up the slack down by his ankle and record the measurement. Except it wasn’t flat against his leg. Isabelle sucked in a deep breath and ran her fingers over the tape, igniting every bit of skin from the inside of his thigh down to his ankle. β€œAll done.” He unclenched everything and let go of the tape, attempting to collect what was left of his mojo.

BOOK SERIES

Brinson Renegades

Offsetting Penalties
OFFSETTING PENALTIES
#1.0 β€’ November 2017

 

 

 

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