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THE CRACKS IN THE KINGDOM

The Cracks In The Kingdom, April 2014
by Jaclyn Moriarty

Arthur A. Levine Books
Featuring: Princess Ko; Elliot Baranski
480 pages
ISBN: 0545397383
EAN: 9780545397384
Kindle: B00G5N4TXK
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"Missing Royals, Different World Communication, and Humor come together in this YA Fantasy"

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THE CRACKS IN THE KINGDOM
Jaclyn Moriarty

Reviewed by Samantha R
Posted May 8, 2014

Fantasy | Young Adult

All but one member of the royal family of Cello is missing. As the only one present, teen Princess Ko must assemble a team to find her family while also keeping her court unaware of their lacking presence. Part of the team is farm boy Elliot, who mainly got chosen for his connection to the World, also known as England, through a girl named Madeleine who he exchanges letters with. Princess Ko suspects her family may be in the World, and it will be up to Elliot and Madeleine to use their connection to find the missing royals.

THE CRACKS IN THE KINGDOM by Jaclyn Moriarty is one of the rare, but very hard books to review for me. It's very hard to label whether or not I liked it, but not because of any confusing plot or actions that don't make sense. This story is filled with humor and very well written in terms of plotting, but it isn't a book that I match up with. The main character, Madeleine, is quirky and lovable, but I struggled to connect with her. The style of writing in the story is along the same lines, extremely quirky, extremely humorous, and it kind of falls into a love-it or hate-it feel. In a way, it kind of reminds me of the TV show, Doctor Who, in the sense that it's something you either get hooked on right away or you never really understand (though in the case of Doctor Who, I was hooked). THE CRACKS IN THE KINGDOM would normally have everything I love: royalty, romance, fantasy, fun characters, etc. When it comes down to it, I really think the style is the only thing that breaks my connection to the story.

That being said, I absolutely, 100% think THE CRACKS IN THE KINGDOM could be someone's favorite story that they just fall in love with. If you really enjoy quirky, kind of out there books, then I would go read it right away. Unfortunately, Jaclyn Moriarty's style, though clearly developed and talented, just isn't for me.

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SUMMARY

Princess Ko's been bluffing about the mysterious absence of her father, desperately trying to keep the government running on her own. But if she can't get him back in a matter of weeks, the consequence may be a devastating war. So under the guise of a publicity stunt she gathers a group of teens -- each with a special ability -- from across the kingdom to crack the unsolvable case of the missing royals of Cello. Chief among these is farm-boy heartthrob Elliot Baranski, more determined than ever to find his own father. And with the royal family trapped in the World with no memory of their former lives, Elliot's value to the Alliance is clear: He's the only one with a connection to the World, through his forbidden communications with Madeleine. Through notes, letters, and late nights, Elliot and Madeleine must find a way to travel across worlds and bring missing loved ones home. The stakes are high, and the writing by turns hilarious and suspenseful, as only Jaclyn Moriarty can be.

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