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COULD YOU BE WITH HER NOW

Could You Be With Her Now, March 2013
by Jen Micalski

Dzanc Books
180 pages
ISBN: 1938103572
EAN: 9781938103575
Kindle: B00CSCNKU0
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"Two novellas show different sides of life"

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COULD YOU BE WITH HER NOW
Jen Micalski

Reviewed by Clare O'Beara
Posted August 10, 2013

Mystery | Thriller

This short book is a combination of two novellas. The first, 'I Can Make it to California Before it's Time for Dinner' tells of an unfortunate teenaged boy with learning difficulties who goes on an impromptu journey and gets blamed for a girl's death, then taken advantage of by an older man. The boy, Jimmy Dembrowski, is well realised as only half-understanding what goes on around him and not understanding strange people's motivations.

The second story, 'May-September' is quite a different matter. Sandra is a grandmother whose daughter Andrea has talked her into writing a blog. This will keep Andrea's kids up to date with her life and help Sandra keep in touch with the modern world. Reluctant but hiding it, Sandra buys a computer. She posts up an ad and Alice answers, a young woman who is willing to help with computer skills and ghostwriting the blog.

There are no quotation marks in the latter story which can make it difficult to follow and to be sure of who is saying which sentence. Sandra is only sixty-seven and she and Alice swap details of their lives. The women in this story are absorbed with themselves and Sandra tends to look back over her life rather than look outward through the worldwide web, as most people would when handed a net- connected computer.

COULD YOU BE WITH HER NOW is not a casual read but concentrates on drawing characters and could suit students of modern creative writing. Jen Micalski has founded a quarterly creative journal called jmww.

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SUMMARY

The title novella is a first-person account of a mentally challenged fourteen-year-old boy who accidentally kills a neighborhood girl and winds up running away and hitching a ride with a trucker who is not as trustworthy a companion as Jimmy believes him to be. Jen Michalski examines the dangers of living in a world while having a compromised reality in this beautiful and engaging story.

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