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BROKEN PROMISES

Broken Promises, July 2012
by Donna M. Zadunajsky

Author Self-Published
Featuring: Jim Culback; Clare Culback
ISBN: 1938037146
EAN: 9781938037146
Kindle: B008KYCAOW
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"A failed marriage leads to murder"

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BROKEN PROMISES
Donna M. Zadunajsky

Reviewed by Clare O'Beara
Posted January 6, 2013

Romance Suspense

A woman discovers that her husband has gone back to his drinking and cheating... while a vicious killer is on the loose, in this tale set in Florida.

In BROKEN PROMISES Clare and Jim lose their house in Ohio and move with their young daughter to Florida where they find work. However Jim is quickly back on the drink he'd told Clare he'd forsworn, and with this comes reckless behaviour. It's not enough that he loses his licence for driving under the influence, he's got fines to pay, he's staying out nights, is occasionally violent and lies to his wife, who puts up with this abusive behaviour for no reason I can see. Yes, Jim's income helps pay the rent, but he costs far more than he earns and he doesn't keep any job for long. When Clare loses her job she opens a cleaning business and soon has many clients, in many ways the total opposite of her husband. They have nothing in common.

A young woman is murdered and Jim, with his philandering ways, is implicated, but Clare can't believe the worst about him and turns to a church where she gets encouraged to join a support group for families of drinkers. Next Jim gets a tax rebate and instead of paying bills or saving decides to start payments on a motorbike. Just when Clare thinks she's had it with him, and starts saving up to leave, matters take a turn for even worse.

BROKEN PROMISES is a first adult novel from Donna Zadunajsky, who has written children's books. I did not identify with the characters or their situations, but perhaps it could help some readers to see their own lives more clearly, just as Clare saw her own situation in a list of symptoms of codependency. The message of getting help from a support group, especially when Clare was away from her own family, was positive for people in many circumstances. The crime element does not enter the book for some time, so mainly it is a story of a miserable marriage. Not the most cheerful of reads, and I hope the author will add more adventure on her next outing.

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SUMMARY

Two years after their marriage, Jim Culback wasn't the man Clare thought he was. How many more broken promises could she accept? After packing up and moving everything they owned from Ohio to Naples, Florida, she actually thought things would get better in their marriage, but as time went by she couldn't take the beatings, the lies, and the cheating any longer. Leaving him, she came across a notebook stuffed under the sofa cushion. Could her husband be capable of doing what he wrote? Is Jim responsible for the murders of two women? A detective from Chicago is put on the case to solve the murders and has an encounter with Clare. What develops between them? Can Clare trust another man? Or does Jim have other plans for Clare?

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