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LINE OF SCRIMMAGE

Line of Scrimmage, September 2008
by Marie Force

Sourcebooks Casablanca
Featuring: Susannah Sanderson; RyanSanderson
368 pages
ISBN: 1402214243
EAN: 9781402214240
Paperback
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LINE OF SCRIMMAGE
Marie Force

Reviewed by Stacey Hayman
Posted October 6, 2008

Romance Contemporary

Ryan and Susannah had nine good years before things fell apart. Then they lived through the nightmare of a stillbirth. Unable to turn to each other, the couple begins to drift apart and eventually they filed for divorce. The book begins ten days before the final court date, when Ryan returns to the house he shared with Susannah to ask for one final chance. He would have been there sooner, but being the star quarterback for the Denver Mavericks has kept him running for the past six months. Seriously injured during the Super Bowl, Ryan could have been sidelined even longer but he was a man on a mission. Susannah was scheduled to marry Henry, a man she's known since the age of fifteen, just days after the divorce is approved. Ryan makes a deal with Susie. If she'll give him those ten days, Ryan won't stand in the way of her second marriage.

Once they're alone in their mountain cabin, it's hard for the couple to keep denying the feelings they still have for each other. True, they need to work on the problems that caused them to split in the first place, but with the kind of love they have it will be worth the effort. Ry and Susie need to trust each other with their thoughts and feelings. They need to share who they were before their baby Justin died and who they are now that they've had time to grieve. Then they can tackle the smaller stuff like: why Susie stuggles to believe Ryan's never lied to her about being other women and if Ryan is really ready to retire from a game where he's such a forceful presence?

Having a couple who lost their baby and then lose their connection to each other, is a tough topic to write about but Marie Force does a great job with it. The fame, fortune, and troubles that go with being a star athlete are also made to feel like a natural part of the story. The characters are extremely likable but it's just as much fun to dislike the villains of the story, right along with the good guys.

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SUMMARY

He's a football star, and he'll do anything to win back his
soon-to-be-ex wife. But her new fiancΓ© will do anything to
stop him ...Rough and sexy Ryan Sanderson, Denver
Mavericks quarterback, has just 10 days to convince Susannah
to give him a second chance before their divorce is final.
Too bad she's already engaged to the boring but safe guy she
dated in college before she met Ryan.Marriage to
Ryan was a whirlwind of passion and energy that left her
feeling exhausted. Tired of playing second fiddle to his
team, wary of the women throwing themselves at her superstar
husband, afraid of the hard hits he took on the field,
Susannah decided that sometimes the thing you want the most
is bad for you.Until Ryan comes back, determined to
win her back, and willing to give up everything except her
love ...

EXCERPT

At the sound of boots landing in her foyer. . .

            β€œExcuse me,” Susannah stammered to her fiancΓ© Henry and his parents as she rushed from the dining room, through the kitchen, and into the foyer, stopping short at the sight of her ex-husband, Ryan.

            β€œWhat are you doing here?” she asked in an exaggerated whisper.

            He was bent in half putting something into the shabby duffle bag that sat at his feet. When he slowly stood up to his full six-foot, four inches, his signature Stetson shaded half his face. One deep dimple appeared when he smiled at her. β€œHello, darlin,” he said in the lazy Texas drawl that used to stop her heart. But now, like everything else about him, it left her cold.

            β€œWhat are you doing here?” she asked again.

            β€œI’m home,” he said with a casual lift of his broad shoulders. He shrugged off a beat-up calfskin jacket and tossed it at the coat stand.

            Susannah wasn’t surprised when the coat snagged a hook and draped itself over the antique brass stand. β€œWhat do you mean home?” she hissed. β€œThis isn’t your home.”

            β€œSee, that’s where you’re wrong.” He made a big show of checking his watch. β€œFor ten more days I own the place.”

            β€œThis house is mine,” she whispered. β€œYou need to get your stuff and get out of here. Right now.” She reached for his coat and yelped when his hand clamped around her wrist.

            Bringing his face to within inches of hers, he grinned and asked, β€œWhy are we whispering?”

            β€œBecause I have guests.” She made a futile attempt to break free of the grip he had on her arm. β€œAnd you’re not welcome here.”

            He sniffed at the air like a dog on the scent of a bone. β€œDo I smell lamb?” He ran his tongue over his bottom lip. β€œYou know I love your lamb. I hope you saved some for me.”

            Realizing the movement of his tongue on his lip had captured her attention, Susannah tore her eyes away. β€œI don’t know what kind of game you think you’re playing, Ryan Sanderson, but you need to pick up your stuff and get out,” Susannah said in an increasingly more urgent tone as she struggled once again to break free of him.

            But instead of letting her go, he brought her left hand up to his face, his brown eyes zeroing in on her engagement ring. β€œIs that the best old Henry could do? Not exactly the rock you got from me, is it?”

            β€œIt doesn’t come with any of the headaches I got from you, either. Now, let me go and get out!”

            β€œLet go of her!” Henry roared from behind Susannah. β€œThis instant!”

            Ryan snorted. β€œOr else what?”

            Susannah wished the marble floor would open up and swallow her whole. β€œHenry, honey, go back to your parents. Everything’s fine. Ryan was just leaving.”

            β€œThe hell I was. I just got home. Is this any way for a wife to greet her husband?” Ryan asked, adding in that exaggerated drawl of his, β€œGot yourself another man while I was off fighting the wars, did ya, darlin’? You didn’t even send a Dear John.”

            With desperation, Susannah glanced up at Ryan. The half of his face that wasn’t hidden by the big hat was set into a stubborn expression that told her he was determined to get his way. This was not good. β€œHenry, please. Go back in with your parents and give me a moment,” Susannah pleaded with her fiancΓ©, who shot daggers at her ex-husbandβ€”or, well, her soon-to-be ex-husband. β€œPlease.”

            β€œOnly if he takes his hands off you,” Henry said. His cheeks were bright red, and he was clearly struggling to keep his rage in check.

            Ryan released Susannah’s arm. β€œHappy now, lover boy?”

            β€œI’ll be happy when you get the hell out of here and go back to whatever rock you crawled out from under.”

            β€œOhh,” Ryan said with a dramatic shiver. β€œI’m scared. You’re so intimidating in that bow tie.”

            β€œThat’s enough, Ryan,” Susannah snapped. With a weak smile for Henry, she nodded toward the dining room.

            After one last long, cold stare for Ryan, Henry turned and left them.

            β€œHe’s a real tiger, that one,” Ryan said with an animated growl. β€œI’ll bet he tears it up in bed.”

            β€œWhat do you want, Ryan?”             β€œIn a word? You.”

            β€œWell, you can’t have me. So this visitβ€”while unexpectedβ€”has been nice.” She spun on her heel and walked away from him. β€œYou know the way out.”

            β€œNot so fast. I’m not going anywhere. This is my house. I bought it and everything in it.”

            Susannah whipped around to face him. β€œAnd you gave it all to me in the divorce!”

            β€œWhich, I might remind you, is not final for ten more days. Now, I’m a pretty reasonable guy, and believe it or not, I’m not looking to start trouble for you and lover boy. So let me make this easy for all of us, okay?”

            Wary, Susannah nodded. β€œThat would be best.”

            β€œWe’ve got ten more days as Mr. and Mrs., and we’re going to spend them together.”

            Susannah started to protest, but Ryan held up his hand to stop her. β€œEvery minute of every day for the next ten days.”

            β€œYou’re out of your mind! There’s no way I’m spending ten minutes with you, let alone ten days. No way.”

            β€œYou always had such a soft spot for the McMansion.” He sent his eyes on a journey through the spacious foyer, the sweeping staircase, and the formal living room. β€œIt took us long enough to hammer out a settlement the first time. A renegotiation would tie things up for months, and in light of your engagement, I’m thinking that might be a little inconvenient for you. . .”

            β€œYou wouldn’t!” Susannah fumed, but even as she said it she knew he would. Her stomach knotted with tension as she thought of the wedding and all her plans with Henry.

            Ryan crossed the marble foyer to her. His scent, a woodsy mixture that always reminded Susannah of the mountains, was as familiar to her as anything in her life. β€œWatch me.”

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