"Exciting suspense, a real grown-up romance, and a fabulous heroine!"
Reviewed by Monique Daoust
Posted July 7, 2017
Romance Suspense | Inspirational Mystery
Six years, and justice still hadn't be done; it was time
the Chosen One took the matter in his own hands. Over dinner, Detective Quinn Holcombe and Maddy McKay
discuss a case: eight people have disappeared over six
months; Maddy, a bodyguard for Elite Guardians and former
FBI agent, agrees to work with Quinn on his case. Maddy
and Quinn have been friends for a long time, and truth be
told, Maddy has been somewhat in love with Quinn, but she
isn't sure where she stands with him, but that particular
evening, he becomes even more surly and unpleasant than
usual, Maddy has had it, and she leaves the restaurant
without looking back. Still, Quinn will get the surprise
party he doesn't want. In a way, Quinn gets his wish,
because he and Maddy get kidnapped before the party! The Elite
Guardians started well enough, but
Lynette Eason has seriously upped the excitement quota
with MOVING TARGET! We're in the thick of things almost
right from the start, and Ms. Eason creates a truly
terrifying atmosphere. The victims don't appear to have
anything in common, even counting Quinn and Maddy; and the
killer's MO doesn't appear to follow any specific pattern.
Maddy and Quinn have to work together if they want to stay
alive, and in spite of their issues, they are friends and
they work well together: Quinn's a thinker, Maddy's a
doer; she's a martial arts expert, and she shows us
indeed! I love the banter between Maddy and Quinn, whether
they are arguing or agreeing. I enjoyed how the author
kept a healthy balance between the suspense and the
romance, and the latter is almost as nail-biting as the
chase for the killer. The romance never intrudes on the
intrigue, but complements it, as Quinn and Maddy face some
of their issues while running for their lives and looking
for the perpetrator. It also gives the reader a welcome
occasional breather from the tension. The inspirational
part is also very cleverly written in the story. Newcomers
to the Elite Guardians series, or readers with
faulty memories will appreciate the author's subtlety in
dropping essential information as needed. It's truly wonderful to read a romance with a heroine who
has a very grown-up and healthy attitude towards
relationships and romance; it was easy to relate to Maddy
as a character and as a romance heroine as well. Both
Quinn and Maddy are exceptionally interesting characters,
with very complex backstories, and I believed in them,
together and separately. Readers who are forever lamenting
the eternal damsel in distress syndrome need to read
MOVING TARGET: Maddy is truly who she is supposed to be,
she definitely does not need a man to save her; she does a
lot of the saving! And wonder of wonders, she never, but
never, does anything stupid. Never! Do you think I liked
Maddy! Lynette Eason also writes superb secondary
characters, such as Sheriff Danvers, a favourite of mine
as characters go, and the killer will make your skin
crawl, in a believable way. MOVING TARGET will keep you on your toes until the last
page with its thrilling suspense, a very intricate plot,
and a romance that rings true ever step of the way. On a
side note, I love the Elite
Guardians stunning and
minimalist covers; this one in particular perfectly
reflects Maddy's personality and strength; this is Maddy,
and in this series the women really are the stars!
SUMMARY
When Maddy McKay and Quinn Holcombe don't show up for
Quinn's surprise birthday party, his friends know that
something is very wrong. Their search turns up little beyond
evidence that Quinn and Maddy just decided to take off for a
long overdue vacation. But it soon becomes apparent that
they did not leave of their own accord. Maddy awakens in a cement room with no idea where she is.
But it's not long before she realizes she's in the clutches
of a madman exacting revenge by hunting. His prey of choice?
Humans. Now Maddy and Quinn must run for their lives, hoping
to find their killer before the next game begins. Because if
they don't win this game, they die. Fast, furious, and flirty, Lynette Eason's relentless
suspense barely gives her readers time to catch their breath
in this third thrilling installment of the Elite Guardians
series.
ExcerptPrologue“. . . for it is written: ‘It is mine to avenge; I will
repay,’ says the Lord.” The words grabbed the man by the throat. He pushed the
half-eaten plate of spaghetti away and studied the passage
again. He had read those words before, but never had he
understood them to mean what was so clear to him now. It had been six years. Six years and the Lord had not exacted his vengeance. And it
suddenly occurred to him why. He was to be the instrument used to ensure justice.
He was the one the Lord had chosen and had just now
revealed to him how he was to carry out the plans that would
set the world right again. He was the chosen one. Stunned at the revelation, he set aside the Bible and picked
up the other book he’d been studying. Just one book in the
hundreds he’d read over the past six years. “Sweetheart?” He looked up. “Yes?” “Could you get me a glass of water, please?” “Of course.” He stood and walked to the sink to fill the glass. As the
water ran from the spigot, he stared at it. And knew what he had to do. Because he was the Chosen One. Chapter One Nine months later
Friday evening
5:30 PM Maddy McKay smiled at the man across the table from her.
“Congratulations on graduating from physical therapy.”
Detective Quinn Holcombe wore khaki cargo pants, a
long-sleeved black T-shirt that he did GQ things
to—and a scowl. “Be careful, your face is going to freeze
like that.” He lifted a brow. A slight improvement. “That’s something
you congratulate someone on?” She sighed. He was always so grumpy. She smiled again. This
one forced. “Of course it is. Do you have no social skills
whatsoever? You were almost crushed to death. You lived. You
finished your physical therapy. I’d say that’s cause to
celebrate—and something to offer congratulations for.” Six
months ago, Quinn had been investigating a case and the
killer had used a backhoe to flip Quinn’s car, trapping him
inside and slamming the arm of the machine down on the
vehicle. Quinn’s broken legs had healed and now he walked
with only a slight limp. This morning, they’d run three
miles without stopping. “You’ve come a long way, Quinn.” He grunted. “Maybe so.” She pursed her lips and leaned back, crossing her arms. His eyes softened. “You’re right, I’m sorry.” “For which offense?” He sighed. “For everything. My lack of social skills for
one. My surliness for another. So . . . thank you. I . . .
uh . . . couldn’t have . . . uh—” he cleared his
throat—“gotten through all of this without you. You know
that, right?” The words combined with the flash of vulnerability reminded
her of what she saw in the man in spite of his acerbic
personality. She gave a short soft laugh. “Of course I know
that.” She eyed him and wrinkled her nose at him. “Although,
with your sunny disposition, I can’t imagine why you didn’t
have people lining up to volunteer to take care of you.” He blinked and shook his head. “There’s no one I would have
wanted there more than you, Maddy. I know I’m a bear
sometimes, but . . . yeah.” “Yeah, you’re a bear sometimes.” She reached over and
squeezed his hand. His willingness to just admit that he’d
needed her, wanted her to be there, touched her.
She’d been so close to smacking him in the head and walking
out on their relationship—if one could call it that. Several
times. Now his words gave her hope that one day he’d open up to
her. Confide in her. Let her share the pain that never left him. “I wanted to ask you something,” Quinn said. “Okay. Ask.” “Why do you hang out with me?” he asked softly. “Why did you
stay with me in the hospital? Through physical therapy?” She swallowed. “I . . . uh . . . well, because of your
charming personality, of course.” He let out a short bark of laughter. “Right. Really. Why?” “We’ve been through a lot together.” “Yeah.” “You didn’t leave my side last year when that lunatic slit
my throat and left me to die.” He looked away. “That was a bad time, Maddy. I really didn’t
think you were going to make it.” “I know. I didn’t think so either.” He caught her gaze. “Is that why you stayed with me? Because
you felt obligated?” “No.” “Then why?” “Because, Quinn. Just . . . because.” She sighed. “I don’t
know. Maybe obligation was part of it, but . . . not
really.” Silence descended. She took a sip of her water.
“So, how’s the puppy doing?” He shot her a look that said he didn’t want to let her off
the hook that easily and she tensed. His scowl deepened.
“Sherlock is a pain in my neck.” “But you like having him there.” He shrugged and sipped his water. “Oh just admit it, you do.” She and her co-workers Olivia
Savage, Katie Matthews, and Haley Callaghan had all gone in
together and gotten him the puppy. A black lab with massive
amounts of energy. Quinn had a large fenced-in yard, and she
knew the two went jogging every morning and evening. “Maybe.” The scowl faded and a small smile played at the
corner of his lips. “Not a resounding yes, but I’ll take it.” She also knew if
he hadn’t wanted the dog, he’d have given him back with a
simple “Thanks, but no thanks.” And he hadn’t done that. She
cut into her steak and took a bite. The savory piece nearly
melted on her tongue. She swallowed. “Have you made any
progress on finding the serial killer?” “No. I mean, I don’t even know if there is a serial
killer.” “But the messages keep coming and the people keep
disappearing, right?” “Yes.” He shook his dark head. “So maybe it’s just a serial
kidnapper? We’re missing something. Why can’t we find them?
Alive? Or even dead?” “He’s got a good hiding place.” “Unfortunately.” Quinn’s scowl deepened. “It’s like they’ve
just fallen off the face of the earth. We’re stumped.” “That’s the way it always seems to go, doesn’t it?” “Yes. Usually. Until he makes a mistake.” “How many victims now?” “Eight. That we know of—over a six-month period of time.” He
ran a hand through his hair. “Or maybe none. I don’t know.” She shuddered. “I worked several serial killer cases when I
was with the FBI. I don’t miss it.” “Well, that’s not what I was hoping to hear.” Wary, she eyed him. “What do you mean?” He reached across the table and took her hand. “I need your
help on this case.” She shook her head. “You’ve turned it over to the FBI. Let
them handle it.” “I’m part of the task force and I want to recruit you.” She pulled her hand from his and ignored the flutter in her
pulse at his touch. It was her turn to scowl. “I’m a
bodyguard now. I quit the FBI for a reason, remember?” She
shrugged. “And besides, I’d have to be sworn back in as a
special investigator or analyst or something, go through the
whole background check thing, et cetera. Is it really worth it?” “That wouldn’t take any time at all. You’re just trying to
come up with excuses.” She grimaced. “Maybe so.” He leaned back and studied her. She resisted the urge to
squirm and took another bite of the steak. While she chewed,
her gaze went from person to person in the restaurant. No
one alarmed her or caused the hair on the back of her neck
to stand on end. When she realized what she was doing, she let her eyes lock
back on to Quinn’s. He was simply waiting. She sighed. “Why me?” “Because you can get in his mind,” he murmured. “Just like
you did with the Butcher.” The serial killer who’d dismembered his victims and cooked
them on the gas grill in his backyard. She still got
nauseous thinking about him. “I don’t want to be in his
head, Quinn. It’s too . . . damaging to my own peace of
mind. We’re not meant to think stuff like that.” “Unfortunately, we have to have people like you to catch
people like him. That’s why you studied psychology, right?” “Partly.” He sighed. “He’s going to kill again.” “Of course he is. They always do.” The steak now sat like
lead in her stomach. “Unless you help me catch him.” She was losing her appetite. “Did you get another note or
something?” “Yes.” The notes came to the station with the victims’ names
and pictures attached—and then the victims disappeared. And
no matter how fast the cops moved, the victims were always
already gone. “And what did it say?” He drew in a deep breath. “‘Judgment Day is coming.’” “And whose name and picture were attached to this one?” “No one’s.” She frowned. “That’s odd. Out of eight letters, he’s never
deviated from his pattern. Are you sure you didn’t miss the
name and picture?” “I’m sure.” She rubbed her forehead, the idea of helping grabbed hold.
He was right. She was good at her job. Correction. Had
been good at her job. She’d tell him about her note in
a moment. Right now, her thoughts were spinning as to who
might be sending the notes. “Could be a copycat,” she said.
“I know you released information about the notes to warn the
public, but there was nothing about the kind of stationery
or if it was handwritten or typed and you never revealed
that the victims’ names were on the notes, right?” “Exactly. I thought the same thing. A copycat.” “So, it could just be someone getting his kicks by emulating
what he learned from watching the news. It wouldn’t take
much to figure out who the lead detective on the case was
and that’s why you got the notes.” “Could be.” He shook his head. “But this feels weird.” “I’ll think about it.” “Thanks, that’s all I ask. Now do you mind if we talk about
something else?” “Actually, I was going to tell you—” “Seriously, no more work stuff tonight, okay?” She shrugged. She’d tell him about the note tomorrow. “Okay
then, I have something I’d like to discuss.” “What?” “Your birthday party tomorrow. You want to come by and pick
me up or you want me to meet you there?” His fork thunked on his plate. She raised a brow and he
shook his head. “I don’t need a party. Why would anyone want
to throw me a party? Do I look like a party person? When
have you ever known me to attend a party? I don’t party.” He
picked the fork back up and viciously jabbed his own piece
of meat. Then he pointed it at her. “They obviously know
nothing about me and are not my friends if they’d do this.” “Right. Because they want to celebrate your birthday with
you and went to all the trouble to set this up. I can see
how you would come to that conclusion.” Maddy could no
longer find her smile. Her irritation was easy to locate
though. And anger. “Now wait a min—” “No, I won’t wait. Look, Quinn, apparently they see
something in you to care about.” She tossed her napkin down.
“I’ll tell them to cancel it. In fact, why don’t I just tell
them to cancel their friendship? If you want to be alone the
rest of your life, then so be it. Enjoy your dinner. Alone.”
She stood and gathered her purse. “Maddy—” His shocked expression was gratifying, but she’d had enough.
More than enough. “I’m getting off the Quinn Holcombe roller
coaster. Congratulations. You’ve managed to push me away. In
fact, I think you’ve managed to shove me straight over the
edge of the cliff. Goodbye and have a nice life.” She headed for the door and she felt his eyes on her back.
Her heart nearly broke in two, but she was done. She loved
him, she freely admitted it, but he was too broken, too
damaged to ever fully trust her, and she couldn’t live with
the stress of loving him anymore. So she’d live with the
stress of loving him and losing him. Because the fact that he let her walk out the door, get into
her car, and drive away spoke volumes. The Chosen One stood about ten feet from the house and,
aided by the gibbous moon, read the directions he’d printed
from the internet one more time. How to disable a home alarm
system. He’d done his research. He knew the kind of alarm
system she had. It was a good one. A pricey one. And a
wireless one. And as he’d found out, all wireless alarm
systems rely on radio frequency signals. The signals bounce
between the door and window sensors. When the system is
breached, the alarm sounds and sends a silent alert to the
monitoring company. But what most people didn’t know was that the signals could
be jammed using radio noise. Radio noise prevented the
signal from getting through the sensors and to the control
panel. Easy peasy. Within seconds, he had the alarm disabled and was through
the back door. He smiled. Now that he’d found his calling,
everything was falling into place. From watching the house over the last several days, the
Chosen One knew she’d enter through the kitchen. Every time
she’d come home, she’d parked in the garage, shutting the
door behind her. Now. He looked around. Where to hide? He would have to act
fast. She was very skilled in self-defense. He’d never beat
her in a hand-to-hand fight. He hefted the canister in his
right hand. She’d be no match for the friend he brought along. After studying her house plans, he knew she had a small
closet off the great room. When she came in through the
garage, she would enter the laundry room, pass the small
utility room and into the open kitchen and dining area. No
place to hide there. Now that he was actually in her house,
he could see that the closet was his best option. As long as
it wasn’t packed to the brim. He walked over and opened the
door. He smiled. Two coats, two filters that probably fit the
ceiling vent in her kitchen, two tennis rackets, and a box
of children’s toys. His smile slipped. She didn’t have
children, but she catered to the mass of nieces and nephews
she had. They would miss her. For a brief moment remorse flickered. He snuffed it out. He
was fulfilling his calling, living out his destiny. Just two
more and his work would be done. He could go back to living
his quiet, simple life and no one would ever know of his
greatness. And that was fine. Because he would know and the raging need for vengeance
would be satisfied. His phone pinged and he glanced at the
screen. What do I do about the pits? What do you mean? You wanted changes. Should I have some driftwood or a tree
limb lying around for them to use to get over some of the
pits safely? Do that for several pits around the perimeter. But space
those out so that they have to find the right ones to cross
to live. Camouflage the others. Wrong area = death. Right
area = they live. Good idea. Thanks. Anytime. He tucked his cell phone into his coat pocket, then slipped
inside the closet to wait for Maddy McKay to arrive home.
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