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For Rent: Dangerous Paradise

For Rent: Dangerous Paradise, February 2014
For Rent Mystery Series Book One
by Eric James Miller

Author Self-Published
Featuring: Dana Santoyo
420 pages
ISBN: 1491038721
EAN: 9781491038727
Kindle: B00HZ7FL6O
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"Who knows what secrets lie behind the doors of this apartment block?"

Fresh Fiction Review

For Rent: Dangerous Paradise
Eric James Miller

Reviewed by Clare O'Beara
Posted May 4, 2014

Mystery

Venice Beach in California is the location for this atmospheric thriller about the residents of an apartment building. To begin with we see Dana, pilfering the groceries from an uninhabited apartment on a muggy summer's day. Dana's friend Serena vanished from that apartment mysteriously and someone might as well use her clothes and food. If it wasn't for the spectral figures that haunt Dana's own room, she'd be happy. FOR RENT: DANGEROUS PARADISE is all the warning we need that life will not run smoothly for the various inhabitants.

Serena, a single mother, is reported missing so the LAPD eventually show up, thinking that a tenant behind on her rent isn't a priority case. Serena's left a lot of good stuff behind however, which Dana is clearing out for the landlady. Dana would like to complete her journalism course, so she tries to be helpful to the detectives. Unfortunately they tell her Serena has been found dead. Does she know anything of importance? And where was she going with Serena's effects?

We next meet cynical landlady Anita; graphic artist David in the next apartment along, who describes the building around a central square as an 'evil fishbowl'; he lies poorly to the cops about some Native artefacts of Serena's that ended up in his room somehow. Then gun-owning salesman Pete; vegetarian, clean-living paranoid Jennifer; musician Sara who composes trashy songs about the dead woman. The sparky, quirky characterisation is the strength of this story with everyone having a different reaction to the beleaguered detectives. We recede to 1968 in search of the origins of the present-day tale, when people were still worried about 'commies' and it wasn't cool to be gay. On Venice Beach through the years though, 'the parties changed but never stopped'.

Detectives Rogers and Schwartz become our guides through this populated niche, so while we don't see much of their lives we get to know them through everyone's responses and their own firm lines of questioning. We have to ask ourselves, how well do we know our neighbours, since most of the tenants here have something to hide, and contemplate violence when queried by officialdom. The intense ending sequence brings a culmination of the clues and accounts, with more firearms popping up in this apartment block than I'd expect in an army barracks. If you haven't figured the solution out for yourself, let Dana guess at this point and hang on for a bumpy ride.

Eric Miller has strung a fine web between all the cast and their rooms, what they could observe or not, who knew the dead woman and who wanted to know her better. While the setting can feel claustrophobic after a time, the details are well drawn and the truths and lies hang together so that whether you are a fan of character-based mysteries or of police procedurals there is something for your taste. FOR RENT, DANGEROUS PARADISE starts with a small ad and ends with a bang.

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SUMMARY

When a single mother is found murdered halfway between L.A. and Vegas, the odd residents of the creepy apartment building where she lived are put under the microscope by two detectives and the woman’s neighbor, journalism student Dana Santoyo.

Set in Venice Beach, California, the story moves through the apartment building unit by unit, chapter by chapter, revealing each resident’s unique point-of-view and the dark, personal secrets they’d rather keep hidden.

In this beautifully eclectic, deadly world of deceit, lust and greed the simmering rivalries and secret passions of the interconnected group of neighbors breathe new life into a simmering, long-forgotten Native American curse. As the body count rises, Dana realizes that being the next target on a killer’s list isn’t nearly as terrifying as being cornered by a haunted past.

Excerpt

~ Prologue ~

During a long, lustrous summer centuries before any European dared name the place Santa Monica Bay, two rivals searched for completely different prey along the virgin coastal marshland.

Vantu closed in on a musky smelling mule deer he had spent the last hour tracking through the lush green reeds. His smooth bronze skin glistened under the baking sun as the rutting beast finally stopped at a small watering hole. The proud warrior hunter from the inland Tongva tribe silently raised his best, sturdiest flint spear for the kill. Behind him, bees and several other large flying insects swarmed around the twisted, pock marked face of Tohi.

As Vantu readied his aim, so too did Tohi.

A sudden chill swept off the ocean. It carried a warning whisper throughout the marsh. Too late, it shuddered, then stalled over the plain of tall grass and stubby trees.

Vantu's body splashed into the black, oily soil. The startled mule deer fled the scene traumatized but unscathed—bolting north towards a scenic haven centuries later called Malibu.

Tohi, the smug, self-entitled, heir apparent grandchild of a local Chumash chieftain, lorded over his victim's body. In the language of his people, a language lost in the tumultuous human struggles that would eventually obliterate his tribe, he muttered, "Now Kriti will be mine. Mine alone!"

Pulling his axe free from flesh and bone, he watched Vantu's body sink slowly into the muck. He marked the grave with only dry spit. Two years later, he returned desperate to break the curse the object of his affection had put on him. The powerful shaman apprentice knew what he had done, only her proof was missing. He tried to kill her. But failed and was banished from his tribe instead. Disfigured from a near fatal bear attack and dying from exposure, Tohi tried to make peace with the ghost of his rival. He failed again. He took his last mortal breath less than fifty feet from Vantu's body and his loveless soul seeped into the moist earth alongside other nasty dead things.

Kriti's curse took root. It slowly poisoned the soil above both graves as centuries swept by like gusts of wind.

Vantu's death remained unforgiven and Tohi's death remained incomplete. The invisible, unmarked sinkholes of anger, regret and longing grew wild, and stronger.

Spanish and Portuguese explorers in ravenous wooden ships began to appear in the bay. They were followed by stern missionaries from the south who built forts and allowed the worship of only one god. They were followed by an endless tide of new, pale-skinned people who migrated into the area not from the sea, or from the south, but out of the vast emptiness to the east. The native people were swallowed up and when there was no one left to remember, the legend of Kriti, Vantu and Tohi was forgotten.

The new people drained the marshes and built rickety wooden homes along closely-knit streets. One of them named the place Venice and built canals like those in its faraway namesake city. The least fortunate of these newcomers unknowingly built above Vantu's petrified heart and Tohi's hollow, watchful eyes.

Jealousy, greed, rage and vengeance simmered, brewed and turned murderous time and time again. Over the years, countless forgotten souls succumbed to a shadowy, festering madness.

Only the worst tragedies were documented. A tenement fire that claimed the lives of a pair of unfaithful lovers, as well as a dozen innocent children, was the very first headline for a startup newspaper. Unfortunately, the fact that the poorly constructed three-story building was built directly over Vantu's unmarked grave was not included in the report. A shootout between bootleggers and law enforcement during the Prohibition years claimed five more lives over Tohi's tormented resting place. But that story too was only partially reported.

During the scrap metal years of the Thirties and Forties, black gold was found in the area and new oil derricks sprang up everywhere. Most of the canals were filled in. Streets were named, paved and put on maps. The growth was violent. Especially around the area of Broadway and Electric. When beach living in southern California became a worldwide brand for having fun during the bobby socks optimism of the Fifties, that corner in the neighborhood remained mired in a silent, sour dystopia.

In 1958, Vantu's and Tohi's graves were finally united within the same property line by a low rent, two-story apartment building located three blocks from the infamous white sands of Venice Beach. To mention the construction problems is unnecessary.

As much of the old started being replaced with new and Jim Morrison's wild child Sixties bled into the me-first Seventies and Eighties, lives continued to collide to ill avail at 399 Broadway. But in the Nineties, a calming influence moved into the building. The violence mysteriously subsided and hope started to flower.

Unfortunately, everything soured again in the first decade of the 21st century, when that calming influence moved away. Bad luck, gang rivalries and drugs were often blamed for the premature deaths in and around the humble apartment building. But Tohi and Vantu were usually the real culprits. Over and over, they used the living in one macabre chess game after another.

Though Vantu's vengeful spirit always intended to target the morally despicable, his bitter, never-ending quest for retribution more often than not caused innocent collateral damage. Tohi fed upon any and all the misery as he grew desperate to find someone with the power to release him from Kriti's curse. Not long ago, he thought he finally found that special person he was looking for.

Unfortunately, she spurned him.

Now, he thinks he has found another. But, if she discovers the real truth, she may refuse to accept his plea for forgiveness and once again Tohi's wrath will know no bounds....


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1 comment posted.

Re: Who knows what secrets lie behind the doors of this apartment block?

I am a follower of Clare O’Beara’s book reviews and always
enjoy them. She has the ability to read and review an
amazing number of books and yet her reviews are thoughtful
and well written. She always captures the spirit of the book
and what the author is communicating. She gives the readers
just enough insight into the plot of the book to truly know
if the book is for them. In this review, I believe she has
truly captured the spirit of the book “For Rent: Dangerous
Paradise”. Readers can confidently trust a review from Ms.
O’Beara to give them a true feel for the book.
(Laura Miller 7:37pm June 24, 2014)

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