My favorite books are inspirational romance, and I’ve been reading them for over
twenty years. I began in publishing with novellas because I used to devour those
four-in-one romance novella compilations. Since then, I’ve written full-length
fiction, but the romantic elements are the same. Here are some of the key
ingredients I look for as a reader, and hope I include as an author, in romance
novels:
A Noble Hero
Sure, he has to be flawed. He must make mistakes. There has to be that one
element he doesn’t have the internal or external strength to do at the beginning
of the story that he’ll be able to do at the end. But he must also have at least
one area of his heart, his life, where he is noble. Perhaps he’s caring for his
elderly grandmother. Or perhaps he’s good to animals. The more noble, the better.
A Strong Heroine
This doesn’t mean she’s bench-pressing twice her weight, nor does it mean she
won’t need help along the way. In my Friday Harbor story, my heroine—a strong
and competent character—needs rescuing. That rescue feels believable, without
making her look weak. And don’t we all need rescuing sometimes? (By the way, in
a bigger way than a one-time slip into the sea, my hero needs rescuing in this
Friday Harbor story too, and the heroine makes that happen for him.)
Warmth
The hero and heroine can argue at the beginning of the story. They can spar and
grate on each other. But as the romance grows following that first attraction,
warmth must develop. If it doesn’t, as a reader I wonder why the lesser grating
character tolerates the other character in his/her life. This has to be
believable. We must see why they are attracted, beyond their physical
attraction. What character trait draws him to her, or vice versa? What action or
heroic act influences the other character to let down their guards and feel
tenderness toward the other character?
Affection
Closely tied to that warmth I just mentioned, is a sense of affection. A huge
turning point in a well-written romance is the moment/scene where the hero or
heroine realizes they are feeling more than attraction for the other leading
character. They are falling in love, or they’ve already fallen. Admitting this
to themselves or to others is a magical element in a romance that spurs the
reader on to see what happens next between them.
Self-Sacrifice
We’ve already mentioned nobility, and this one goes along with that. When you
love someone, you do things for them. Moms give birth to babies out of love.
Parents work hard to provide for their children, out of love. Love inspires us
to sacrifice our comforts for someone else. After the hero or heroine realizes
they are in love, they are motivated in a pure way to sacrifice themselves for
the other character. That makes for a fine grand gesture as the
happily-ever-after novel climaxes before resolving in happy sighs from readers.
How about you? As a reader of romance, do you look for certain elements? Do
certain character traits or story elements make for a good novel, in your opinion?
Happy reading, friends!
Watch for Annette's upcoming book
FINDING LOVE IN FRIDAY HARBOR, WASHINGTON
Book One in the Washington Island Romance series by Annette M. Irby
Release date: September 1, 2017
Will keeping his promise lead to another broken heart—or help them find love again?
Professor Mikaela Rhoades has a plan: she’ll encourage her
students’ marine biology research through an exclusive program while helping an
old family friend’s whale touring business stay afloat. The challenge is the
tour captain is her first love and ex-fiancé. Mikaela longs to help his family
in the wake of his father’s death, but she’s keeping secrets. She’ll have to
face her past and overcome her concerns about the future to make it through the
summer.
Captain Hunter Cahill has taken over the family touring
business after his father’s death. Unfortunately, he’s drowning in grief and
accumulated debt. He’s hoping the incoming stodgy professor will help resurrect
the failing business, but he’s not prepared when that professor turns out to be
Mikaela, his former fiancée. To make matters more difficult, he’d promised his
father to pursue her if she ever returned to the island single. The more time
they spend together, the easier it is to keep that promise, though she still
plans to leave at the end of the season. How much will it cost him to spend the
summer romancing Mikaela?
Annette M. Irby has been writing since her teen years when
she sat pounding out stories on a vintage typewriter just for fun. Since then,
she’s joined Christian writing groups and launched blogs so she could share the
joy of writing. She likes to say she’s addicted to color as flowers and
seascapes inspire her. In her off hours, she enjoys gardening, photography, and
music. She lives with her husband and family in the Pacific Northwest.
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11 comments posted.
I do not look for certain elements in the books that I read. I look for one that sounds good. If I really enjoy the book, I look for more by the same author.
(Cynthia Cook 4:57pm July 30, 2017)
I've started a LIttle Free Library and I'm trying to find stuff that the neighborhood would enjoy - and I think this might do the trick.
(Jean Mitchell 5:48pm August 2, 2017)
As a romance reader, I do look for certain elements that grabs my interest and keeps me reading the story. Also, writing style is something I also notice in a book; an amazing author has a writing style that is unique and grabs my pique.
(Ela Raymundo 5:49pm August 2, 2017)