Conflict
What is conflict? How does it affect story?
In fiction, conflict comes in two forms, internal and
external.
Internal conflict happens due to struggles within a character’s heart
and mind.
External conflict occurs due to the environment the character lives in or
is exposed to.
An example of titanic conflict, both internal and external occurs in the
movie The
Patriot. During the American Revolution Mel Gibson's character
is faced with an impossible choice--should he fight for his beloved country’s
freedom, or should he stay behind to protect his family?
In choosing to stay with his family, Gibson’s character illustrates massive
internal conflict. His choice goes against his sense of patriotism and
makes him look cowardly to peers.
External conflict occurs when one of Gibson’s sons, a soldier in the
revolution, is captured by the British and another of his sons, a child, is
killed by the enemy. This external conflict, which happens in his
environment, causes him to leave his duties with his family to fight for his
country.
How does a writer effectively incorporate conflict into her story? A key
way to find the answer to this question is to ask another question or two while
organizing the plot line.
What can go wrong next? Or How can things get worse?
Let’s look at an example of plotting conflict using my contemporary romance
Stolen Son.
My idea for the book’s premise was this: suppose a scrupulously honest widower
discovered that his five-year-old son was illegally adopted. Conflict:
his honesty is challenged by a legal duty to correct the problem. Worsening
of conflict: he discovers it was his beloved late wife who kidnapped the
baby and set in motion the illegal adoption.
He decides he must try to make things right. He learns the identity of the
birth mother and takes a job working for her. Before he reveals his secret, he
must know she’s a good woman, not someone who would put his son in danger.
Worsening of conflict: as he discovers how wonderful she is, he falls in
love with her, and she’s in love with him. Can he tell her the truth? At this
point, he has everything to lose.
Internal conflict is monumental in this story. Guilt haunts this honest
man as he seems to be doing everything against his own nature. And things don’t
get any easier from this point on. Plenty more "goes wrong" and "gets worse”"
before the end of this book (which does manage to reach an uplifting conclusion.
I promise.). Conflict abounds from the heroine’s point of view too, as I’m
sure you can imagine.
In a romance novel internal conflict pulls the hero and heroine together
while external conflict keeps them apart.
In a mystery novel, internal conflict would be the force driving the
protagonist toward solving the mystery. External conflict comes from
forces throwing the hero off course. Suspense and thrillers are similar to
mysteries in this way.
The importance of conflict in stories is not limited to the plot line.
It is vital to develop rich characters who are bound to rub each other the wrong
way in order to heighten conflict.
The greater the conflict, the more monumental the challenge to the
characters, the more compelling the story.
In other words, conflict is the essence of story. In fact,
conflict is story.
Fran Shaff,
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5 comments posted.
It Could Always Be Worse is the name of a kids book and coming from this POV, imagining the worst is where the creative juices flow for both the writer and reader. If everything was vanilla, it would be a very plain world indeed.
(Alyson Widen 11:04am March 12, 2010)
Conflict is essential in great storytelling. It can be minor points of conflict or big blow ups.
(Mary Preston 3:56pm March 12, 2010)
I'm a person who's avoided "conflict" as much as possible. But conflict in all books? That was a hard thing to swallow at first. But I finally did, especially the internal conflict--maybe because I go through a lot of that myself. So thanks for explaining it so well here.
(Sigrun Schulz 9:59pm March 12, 2010)
Very good article. I agree with the above about how well you explained it. I enjoy conflict in books - but, not conflict for conflict's sake.
(Karin Tillotson 8:33pm March 14, 2010)